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WE'VE
Weaving without movement, a
silence of breath hollow,
back arcs, skin kiss, lips slip, that
clit tip and throat swallow
believing on, no leaving be
a snatch of a moment, that
heightens and heightens, then
Titans and follows, that
tightens and follows, that
tight ends and falls, oh,
and catches a moment
we've weaved without movement
back to the moment
that swallows the silence.
silence of breath hollow,
back arcs, skin kiss, lips slip, that
clit tip and throat swallow
believing on, no leaving be
a snatch of a moment, that
heightens and heightens, then
Titans and follows, that
tightens and follows, that
tight ends and falls, oh,
and catches a moment
we've weaved without movement
back to the moment
that swallows the silence.
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Re: WE'VE
5th Jan 2014 4:22am
There's that word play, working like a dream and really so very charged with erotic tension. Enjoyed the read.
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5th Jan 2014 9:56am
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Anonymous
5th Jan 2014 5:56am
The weaving of images in and out is so very enticing. Meshing together into a scene in my mind of utter beauty!
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5th Jan 2014 10:00am
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Anonymous
5th Jan 2014 6:23am
Interwoven work
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5th Jan 2014 10:01am
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5th Jan 2014 7:33am
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5th Jan 2014 3:13pm
. . . And so the strands of sensuality weave the perfect tapestry of passion . . . .
Emotionally Edgy! Sooo enjoyed the Intensity of Your Ink, my Friend!!
Emotionally Edgy! Sooo enjoyed the Intensity of Your Ink, my Friend!!
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and so enchanting one, two strands weave to become one
if you enjoyed this check out SALT my other poem on this erotic theme
if you enjoyed this check out SALT my other poem on this erotic theme
Re: WE'VE
5th Jan 2014 8:31pm
nicely written, I love it, good job whale, I love your work it really good.
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5th Jan 2014 8:56pm
Thanks for your appreciation Mr.Psycho as I know you always tell it the way you see it
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Anonymous
5th Jan 2014 9:19pm
"Titans and follows, that
tightens and follows, that
tight ends and falls, oh, "
Oh meow m'yow mm'ow (yeh...contractions.) :D
tightens and follows, that
tight ends and falls, oh, "
Oh meow m'yow mm'ow (yeh...contractions.) :D
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5th Jan 2014 9:36pm
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5th Jan 2014 10:51pm
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Anonymous
6th Jan 2014 3:21am
Oooooo! Short, sweet, sexy!!! Enjoyed! :)
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Anonymous
6th Jan 2014 5:16am
I'm a huge fan of word play, words which compliment each other by sound or suggestion/imagery but most importantly any form of sophisticated poem in erotic nature.
This most definitely fits all those categories, exceptionally well done!
This most definitely fits all those categories, exceptionally well done!
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6th Jan 2014 9:26am
Thank you for this supportive critique!
For me Vee means:
Very insightful
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So this is great.
For me Vee means:
Very insightful
Very talented
Very special
So this is great.