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Beautiful
Beautiful.
Often is all that's needed
to be said,
of the mind,
heart and body,
to be told
beautiful,
there are few words
with greater impact,
Though, I can think of one..
Often is all that's needed
to be said,
of the mind,
heart and body,
to be told
beautiful,
there are few words
with greater impact,
Though, I can think of one..
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Re: Beautiful
Anonymous
4th Jan 2014 9:36pm
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Re: Beautiful
4th Jan 2014 11:23pm
What a coincidence! I have been pondering my seeming overuse of this word when commenting on others poetry. I conclude that often it is the only word fit to describe my feelings. Thanks for validating my conclusion :)
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re: Re: Beautiful
4th Jan 2014 11:34pm
Re: Beautiful
4th Jan 2014 11:55pm
Just so beautiful
is one, who is none
other than one who sees
beauty in another one
nude..stark nude or prude
beauty is allowed to be rude
and all love to see it
beneath the silken sheath
standing proud
beneath the powdered layers
and perfumes
beauty allows
anyone to consume love and elixir that beauty cares dribbles shoots or taste like a pair of pears beauty 'tis
a semblance of lust
thrust and penetrational thirst
as beauty must need, be rewarded
by all in love first
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5th Jan 2014 00:01am
Re: Beautiful
Anonymous
5th Jan 2014 1:49am
This gave me all sorts of warm fuzzies...

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5th Jan 2014 6:26am
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5th Jan 2014 3:36am
Re: Beautiful
5th Jan 2014 7:51am
Two of the deepest and most important words I know Ms Rose. Either of which can change everything about thought and feeling. Both of these words do not have their uses fully realised often enough. Thank you for the pointed thoughts Ms Rose.
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