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Who
Who knows your
Deepest secrets? Me.
Darkest dreams? Me.
Most dreary thoughts? Me.
Dirtiest fantasies? Me.
Delinquent heart? Me.
Who am I? You.
Who are you? Me.
Who can
Destroy you? Me.
Dishevel you? Me.
Who will
End you? Me.
Who will
End me? You.
Deepest secrets? Me.
Darkest dreams? Me.
Most dreary thoughts? Me.
Dirtiest fantasies? Me.
Delinquent heart? Me.
Who am I? You.
Who are you? Me.
Who can
Destroy you? Me.
Dishevel you? Me.
Who will
End you? Me.
Who will
End me? You.
Published 4th Jan 2014
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Anonymous
4th Jan 2014 3:52am
Very true. I love this!
4th Jan 2014 5:34am
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4th Jan 2014 7:12pm
4th Jan 2014 8:30pm
Good work! It's weird how much the words "me" and "I" are disconnected.
I can only act upon myself, whereas only other people can act upon me.
Grammar pushes me and I apart so much that they become two people while still being one as you so wonderfully exhibited.
I can only act upon myself, whereas only other people can act upon me.
Grammar pushes me and I apart so much that they become two people while still being one as you so wonderfully exhibited.
4th Jan 2014 11:27pm
9th Jan 2014 1:22am
Hey rock on me and you, sounds like you have me under control! Enjoyed this piece.
9th Jan 2014 3:05am
Reading your poems- I don't think it'd be a tough job to get you under control. ;). But, thanks for the compliment- glad you liked it.
10th Jan 2014 3:01am
