A New Year- 'Pomp, n' Circumstance'

I really like this! Great art-work of mind and hand :)  

You like it huh? Hhmmm?? must be into the darkness or something! lol jk... Thank you my sweet friend, appreciate you much :)

Falling into the poem...._

Thank you kindly, truly appreciate your time n thoughts on my ink :)

Very graphically beautiful so as I read I feel I am falling into it. Great write!

Aaaawwww so wonderfully sweet of you to say that! Thank you so much, I appreciate it :)

oh wow PIKM i love the structure, superb way of hooking your reader and the play of words, clever :)

Just trying out some things... U know how it is
Saying 'old things' in new ways...sometimes it works, so times it don't :) thank my precious lady, I'm grateful as always for ur support :)

...lovely piece, beautifully written....Xo

My beautiful Rain, thank you so much sweetheart, ur always there for me n I'm truly grateful n blessed to have you in my corner :) happy New Year :)

just beautiful imagination
tis like a
loosely hanging phallus
hoping some day it will erect

Lmao really? lol thanks for your support dude
I appreciate it :)

i have seen many hanker
so i can say
long or short its okay
but must erect
some day
or once in a way

Gotcha ;) have a happy N.Y.E. dude :)

same 4 uuuuuuuuuuuuuu

Great write for a Great piece Bro.!!
Awesome read!!!

Sir Lancelott

Thanks Lance, appreciate it much bro! Happy New Year to you n yours :)

Tissue thin soul... wow. This is deep with its spiraling effect. well done, Poetik:)

Aaaawwww there she is! My sweet whisper of affection... :)
Thank you my dear, much appreciated :)

Mr. Poetik,your mind...is one of a kind.(Happy New Year Bro!)

Thank you my friend, my brother, my poet...truly n always appreciate you! Happy New Year to you as well! :)

My brother once again you've been in my head for your ink-spiration..you write me Man! You can write me over this shit any time my friend..Thank You!

I guess I got a bad habit of doing that huh? lol
Me so sorry bro. But hey I'm happy you're good with it! ;) lol n I thank you always too n Happy New Year to you!

firstly, a very happy new year to you, Papi. muah!!

i loved the structure of this, it's like falling through the words and into darkness... or using ink as a slip n slide ^.^

beautifully written xoxox  

Thank you mami! Happy New Year to you as well!
Mmmmmuuaahh!! lol
N a big thank u for always supporting me
I'm forever grateful to u mi amor... :)

ahhhh a poet's words fall on the page like sands slipping thru the hourglass yes indeed time keeps falling..and i love the concept content and structure of this scribe..Beautiful Ink Sir..Well Done!!!

Wow! Ur back! I've missed u my sweet
lady, n thank you for your unwaivering  
support :)

A shredding and profound write, Poe.
Don't we all feel like
mere confetti sometimes?
Happy New Year to you!

Yes I'd say to that question n thanks for the well wishes n the read n comment my sweetness...Happy New Year to u as well :)

Thank you my sweet friend, happy you liked
I appreciate you :)

love the form of this,

Thank you... Appreciate ur time n thoughts :)

I came again  to see
if it had erected  

well i thought twas a different erection
sad twas not
its still half past six

same guys is it?

Thanks bro! Appreciate it as always n happy new year to you! :)

When yours does rise again
and in length do gain
let his gun stand
to erection
and fire hot sweet cum
then send me a sms  

the guys done  
he had finally cum

and
I will say
show me the sum
when and how much he'd cum
thanks saint
you are foreign
A lovely poet  
I can see
through  eyes of mine so sexy  
want to see??

Beautiful piece. Well written. Xo!

Thank you CeCe, ur so sweet... I'm always happy n grateful for your visits n support :) Happy New Year to u as well :)

Same to you, love! Check out my new piece.

How did I miss this on my updates?!? It's exactly what I needed to read on New Years. Really great write. You are a fantastic writer. :)

I'm not sure but hey I've done that myself too lol
Truly appreciate your wonderfully sweet comment! Happy New Year to you my friend, n thank you for support :)