" Lost"

Effective use of disjointed phrases. Been there, too. Warmth and light are so important...

Feeling your funk... hope it passes soon.

Thank you funk-feeler. I'll be good soon enough.

Je vous remercie Gabriel au nom de Atakti. Vous etes celebrer les jours feries? ;-) J'aimerais avoir son talent.

Errr, Gabriel, this is Jake's poem... Yes, another talent to watch.

:)

"sick"?  Hope you feel better, Jake. We'll be watchin' and hopin'.

Just the Jingle Bell flops.. I'm already cured from the attention deficit disorder Artina. Thank you for wishing me well and stopping by.  

Feeling the frustration and despair--the desperation and confusion as one struggles through the darkness, searching for hope-lite....

Creatively clever use of phrasing adds to the tone of this piece.

Stay strong....and keep looking up, my friend!

Okay, I'm officially better now from all the snuggling from DU's femme fatale's finest! ;-)
Thank you Enchantress for being you.

...hope you're found soon... :) Nice ink Jake...Xo

Ah, when it Rains...

  You're being gracious..thank you poetess. Your poems are phenomenal.  

Right now,  I'm feeling this deep.Thank you for sharing.

I feel for you dear. This write, though short, conveys somewhere, anywhere else I'd like to be. I sincerely hope a quick climb out from your despair. Glad to share with you dear Tommie.

Completely feel it!

Ah, then I hope you recover and replenish anew quickly friend.