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The Holder
In loneliness he is my sidekick with me always
He is the holder of my dreams the bearer of my desires
It feels like heaven and he's the only one
He is the holder of my dreams the bearer of my desires
It feels like heaven and he's the only one
Published 25th Dec 2013
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25th Dec 2013 5:23pm
Who is that masked man...no don't tell me it'll spoil the superhero mystique :) This is beautiful, Tommie!
25th Dec 2013 11:03pm
He doesn't wear a mask! :D
He doesn't have to hide who he is! :D
Thank you for reading GW. :)
He doesn't have to hide who he is! :D
Thank you for reading GW. :)
25th Dec 2013 11:19pm
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25th Dec 2013 7:54pm
Echo GW. I am sure any man of which that is truthfully said would feel honoured by those words,
25th Dec 2013 11:04pm
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25th Dec 2013 8:22pm
i ain't wanted no mo....rM :D
25th Dec 2013 11:06pm
Funny thing about "feelings", they sneak up on ya...you might be wanted but don't know it yet.Thanks RM.
25th Dec 2013 9:18pm
well my name is Heaven ok so and I bare these words Tommie speaks about because I am that kind of guy
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26th Dec 2013 2:36am
wht a chemistry I feel the charge of ur love the burn of desire from this piece u botht r lucky to have such fire tht many long for beautiful piece
26th Dec 2013 2:58am
Tommie Lynn. My dear you've got me once more. Loving this Angel. You have a way. It's a way I love. Thank you babe. Your awesome. xoxoxox
26th Dec 2013 5:30am
It makes me very happy that you like it TS, I appreciate you reading and you leaving feedback.Thank you love xo
