deepundergroundpoetry.com
Soul walking
To have an understanding
Clear the fog of confusion
One must walk with reality
I did more
Do more
Went walking with your soul
Found it uplifting
Tipped towards unclear
Caressed your hopes
Soothed fears
Said it would be ok
Even though I couldn't
See the light
We are lost but together
We found something more
Seems impossible
In your shoes
Totally agree
But you are not alone
Our souls know more than this
Been together spiritual
Many times
Keeping it together
Us together
In your shoes
I'll keep walking
Eventually
Everything will fit
Fall into place
We will walk together
It'll happen my love
We cant see it right now
But that's ok
Love conquers
Surrendering to you
Always
Clear the fog of confusion
One must walk with reality
I did more
Do more
Went walking with your soul
Found it uplifting
Tipped towards unclear
Caressed your hopes
Soothed fears
Said it would be ok
Even though I couldn't
See the light
We are lost but together
We found something more
Seems impossible
In your shoes
Totally agree
But you are not alone
Our souls know more than this
Been together spiritual
Many times
Keeping it together
Us together
In your shoes
I'll keep walking
Eventually
Everything will fit
Fall into place
We will walk together
It'll happen my love
We cant see it right now
But that's ok
Love conquers
Surrendering to you
Always
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 8
reading list entries 2
comments 19
reads 969
Commenting Preference:
The author is looking for friendly feedback.
Re: Soul walking
20th Dec 2013 8:26am
re: Re: Soul walking
20th Dec 2013 8:33am
re: re: Re: Soul walking
20th Dec 2013 11:48am
Re: Soul walking
20th Dec 2013 10:55am
like footprints together in the sand. seeing light down the long road...
0
re: Re: Soul walking
20th Dec 2013 11:23am
Thankyou John
Its about keeping a flame
When the darkness falls
Being there
Good times and bad
Its about keeping a flame
When the darkness falls
Being there
Good times and bad
Re: Soul walking
20th Dec 2013 2:51pm
re: Re: Soul walking
20th Dec 2013 5:15pm
Re: Soul walking
Anonymous
20th Dec 2013 4:02pm
one can only Hope! hope to be joined in the journey we call the walk of life...so hope you're accompanied :)
0
Re: Soul walking
20th Dec 2013 11:04pm
re: Re: Soul walking
20th Dec 2013 11:17pm
Re: Soul walking
Anonymous
21st Dec 2013 7:23am
Very sweet and promising poem.
Hope is a good thing :)
Hope is a good thing :)
0
re: Re: Soul walking
21st Dec 2013 7:58am
Re: Soul walking
22nd Dec 2013 00:39am
re: Re: Soul walking
22nd Dec 2013 8:10am
Re: Soul walking
22nd Dec 2013 9:45am
Leaves a hope for un acquired or un seen love. And soul loving. Something not as much understood in a world warming to throw away relationships. Just dump it when you bored and buy new. Thank you Rose. Really.
0
re: Re: Soul walking
22nd Dec 2013 3:53pm
thanks for lovely commenting sway
happy you liked it
couldnt agree more
xD
happy you liked it
couldnt agree more
xD
re: Re: Soul walking
24th Mar 2015 5:05am
Thankyou Manny
I've not read thus for awhile so thankyou for bringing it back to the front of the pile xD
I've not read thus for awhile so thankyou for bringing it back to the front of the pile xD