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Scars
Betrayal hurts inside out
I've been abandoned
He's been deceitful
Old scars bleed into the
Cracks of lies
Damn near beaten to death
I've been abandoned
He's been deceitful
Old scars bleed into the
Cracks of lies
Damn near beaten to death
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Re: Scars
17th Dec 2013 7:28pm
I can feel the pain in this Tommie! Remember you're worth too much to dwell on others bad decisions. Well done!
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17th Dec 2013 9:08pm
Re: Scars
17th Dec 2013 7:33pm
I hope that you find all of the happiness in the world. Your poetry is often sad but very beautiful. :)
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17th Dec 2013 9:09pm
Re: Scars
17th Dec 2013 7:34pm
Which leads to the question of how those scars influence the present and the future?
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17th Dec 2013 9:11pm
Re: Scars
do you know
the modern guy
he has one hand on his zipper
why ?
his fly is always open
for an opportune moment
and if heaven sent
he will not waste time to unzip
he had it all along open
then after having one taken
he says
any one .....
upon me
let's cum
Inspired by SCARS
by
tommielynn
the modern guy
he has one hand on his zipper
why ?
his fly is always open
for an opportune moment
and if heaven sent
he will not waste time to unzip
he had it all along open
then after having one taken
he says
any one .....
upon me
let's cum
Inspired by SCARS
by
tommielynn
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re: Re: Scars
17th Dec 2013 9:15pm
Well A that is one hell of a poem.Fly open all along, True!Thank you for this piece and for reading me.
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17th Dec 2013 9:42pm
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17th Dec 2013 9:56pm
can i ask u
how young are you???
lovely poetry comes
to only some
who can earnestly cum
how young are you???
lovely poetry comes
to only some
who can earnestly cum
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Re: Scars
17th Dec 2013 8:51pm
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Re: Scars
Once they bleed into each other it can get a little blurry babe. Head up Tommie. Onward and upwards. Love your work Doll.
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18th Dec 2013 1:22am