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I'LL NEVER
I’ll never be
considered dangerous
though I sail on dangerous seas
I’ll never strike
fear in another
for intimidation
I am not wired
I’ll never make
a good liar
with a transparent
countenance of guilt
am I cursed
or blessed
I’ll never deny
a soul it’s freedom
we were born to soar
else why give us wings
and a limitless sky?
I’ll never choose
violence to express
my frustration, anger
I am no pacifist
possessed I am
with a fierce
desire for justice
yet I am neither an aggressor
I will never bruise
or beat to subject
another to my will, desire
or to teach a lesson
to do so is to wreck
a masterpiece
by deity designed
and manufactured
in a mother’s womb
I am tender hearted
by deeply felt emotion
overcome at times
some may say a wimp
at most a bore
I will always be me
a sometimes wise man, a poet
such is the *quintessence
of my dust
* Nod to Shakespeare’s “Hamlet”
considered dangerous
though I sail on dangerous seas
I’ll never strike
fear in another
for intimidation
I am not wired
I’ll never make
a good liar
with a transparent
countenance of guilt
am I cursed
or blessed
I’ll never deny
a soul it’s freedom
we were born to soar
else why give us wings
and a limitless sky?
I’ll never choose
violence to express
my frustration, anger
I am no pacifist
possessed I am
with a fierce
desire for justice
yet I am neither an aggressor
I will never bruise
or beat to subject
another to my will, desire
or to teach a lesson
to do so is to wreck
a masterpiece
by deity designed
and manufactured
in a mother’s womb
I am tender hearted
by deeply felt emotion
overcome at times
some may say a wimp
at most a bore
I will always be me
a sometimes wise man, a poet
such is the *quintessence
of my dust
* Nod to Shakespeare’s “Hamlet”
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Re: I'LL NEVER
16th Dec 2013 9:33am
flows like liquid
wonderful statement about you
if everyone followed this thinking
then the world would sing a sweeter song
wonderful statement about you
if everyone followed this thinking
then the world would sing a sweeter song
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17th Dec 2013 4:42am
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16th Dec 2013 10:48am
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17th Dec 2013 4:43am
Thank you Tommie! It helps me to understand me when I write it down. I am so glad you like it.
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16th Jan 2014 3:40am
There's nothin weak I see hear my friend. Strength in softness is an invaluable trait ver sought after. Your a definitely blessed brother. Lovely ink GW.
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Thank you Twitch. I do appreciate very much your comment. There is infinite strength in kindness and power in the tender heart.
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Anonymous
17th Aug 2019 8:55pm
the sincerity in your vibes are very very refreshing...
confident in your core being...
much respect Brother
confident in your core being...
much respect Brother
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17th Aug 2019 11:06pm
Thank you, Brother! I can ask for nothing better than to be considered sincere.
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Anonymous
28th Mar 2021 11:44pm
I chose to go back in time and read your first poem. What a beautiful human you are, I particularly loved the imagery for this stanza
“ I’ll never deny
a soul it’s freedom
we were born to soar
else why give us wings
and a limitless sky? ”
Powerful words that just ring so much sense and clarity. It is that simple. Great messages throughout this piece
“ I’ll never deny
a soul it’s freedom
we were born to soar
else why give us wings
and a limitless sky? ”
Powerful words that just ring so much sense and clarity. It is that simple. Great messages throughout this piece
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29th Mar 2021 2:26am
Oh Gwendoline I am very touched that you chosee to read this piece. I needed to read this again and I thrilled reading the other commemts of some old fruends thst I miss dearly. I am equally touched by your beautiful comment. From your words I can cleary sense that you too are a beautuful, deep thinking human. 🙏
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Anonymous
29th Mar 2021 8:34am
I am so happy that by reading this, it also brought your some extra comfort today. It’s always lovely when paths cross, they lead us somewhere we needed to goto :
You have a beautiful mind :)
You have a beautiful mind :)
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