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Spiral Staircase
Withdrawing, descending
Down a spiral staircase
Reflecting shades of grey
Mechanical voices echoing
Off the walls of my fortress
Retreating into myself
I am at rest
In this state of solitude.
The walls blacken
As I reach the depths of my cell
This is where my shadows dwell
Flickering and fading
Just out of sight
I curl myself into a ball and grow spikes
The fight is on
One for my life
Inner turmoil, outside strife
Down the spiral staircase
Cold relief
Feeling nothing
I have peace.
Down a spiral staircase
Reflecting shades of grey
Mechanical voices echoing
Off the walls of my fortress
Retreating into myself
I am at rest
In this state of solitude.
The walls blacken
As I reach the depths of my cell
This is where my shadows dwell
Flickering and fading
Just out of sight
I curl myself into a ball and grow spikes
The fight is on
One for my life
Inner turmoil, outside strife
Down the spiral staircase
Cold relief
Feeling nothing
I have peace.
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Extremely well done.
6th Feb 2011 4:56am
Thank you
6th Feb 2011 5:01am
Thank you..I have extremely dark poems I want to post..You give me courage to do so..your comments are deeply appreciated..peace Crimsin
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Anonymous
6th Feb 2011 6:34am
I love this..
added to my reading list.
Definitely one of my favorites that I have read on here so far...
Thank you for all of the comments aswell :]
added to my reading list.
Definitely one of my favorites that I have read on here so far...
Thank you for all of the comments aswell :]
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Thank you
6th Feb 2011 6:36am
Thank you..I get your poems you express your emotions in a way that bring the reader in..peace Crimsin
interesting
6th Feb 2011 9:02am
Thank you
6th Feb 2011 6:04pm
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Anonymous
28th Apr 2015 11:02pm
I love your work it is so beautiful and so descriptive to read!
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31st Dec 2017 6:13pm
Speaks to me of how you have to find peace with your darkness to ascend into the light.
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9th Sep 2018 4:52am
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9th Sep 2018 4:58am
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9th Sep 2018 5:01am
thank you dearest Augustinomni for bringing to light my early writing days...
I deeply appreciate it 😊
love Crimsin
I deeply appreciate it 😊
love Crimsin
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24th Feb 2019 00:37am
Nothing like cloaking in the shadows at the bottom safe from all ... Bless and love ..
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