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Bruised Flower
Missing your presence
spiraling into darkness
vulnerable to your touch
cruelly you withhold
teaching me my place
I've become to bold
for your taste
a bruised flower
you hold in your hands
so easily crushed
should you decide
tender for you
only you make me feel
poet of poets
I look deep
into the depths
of your eyes
and I get lost
talking with you
bound by lust
afraid of love
I find myself upon
your shores
in dreams
spiraling into darkness
vulnerable to your touch
cruelly you withhold
teaching me my place
I've become to bold
for your taste
a bruised flower
you hold in your hands
so easily crushed
should you decide
tender for you
only you make me feel
poet of poets
I look deep
into the depths
of your eyes
and I get lost
talking with you
bound by lust
afraid of love
I find myself upon
your shores
in dreams
Published 11th Dec 2013
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11th Dec 2013 5:39pm
11th Dec 2013 5:51pm
thank you beautiful Angel for your gracious comment touching my heart :) much love Crim
11th Dec 2013 7:22pm
11th Dec 2013 7:09pm
A bruised flower spiraling into the darkness lusting into the depth of Crimson poetry, I dream at the shores edge captured by her ink that has taken over me.
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11th Dec 2013 7:46pm
enchanting, Crim. so much beauty in subservience, & ecstasy in the bruises...
11th Dec 2013 11:29pm
Anonymous
11th Dec 2013 8:27pm
Crim,
If the squeaky hinge receives the most oil; does the bruised flower? ; ) Beautiful dreams!
tornado
If the squeaky hinge receives the most oil; does the bruised flower? ; ) Beautiful dreams!
tornado
11th Dec 2013 11:30pm
Anonymous
11th Dec 2013 9:15pm
I feel the heavy sadness in this..powerful write dear Crim! Sometimes we need the courage to succeed and the ignorance to go for it regardless of the gamble--aint none of us getting out alive-live and love. Lovely work.
Peace, miki
Peace, miki
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12th Dec 2013 1:28am
Yes Poet.. thank you for getting this poem and the gracious comment :) much love Crim
Anonymous
12th Dec 2013 1:52am
Crim-iny I'm stumblebumming around looking for the right words babygirl..this is an exquisitely artful scribe my friend..so 'sub'! so thankful!
I love this! you're genius!
I love this! you're genius!
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12th Dec 2013 3:44am
I've been the scent of a bruised flower before.......the blossom is beautiful before the bruise. Lovely dear Brenda....Xo
12th Dec 2013 5:07pm
thank you for such a beautiful and thoughtful comment sweet Rain :) much love Brenda
Anonymous
12th Dec 2013 4:50am
The state of vulnerability has such beauty and this is beautiful Brenda. Stunning lines from beginning to finish!
12th Dec 2013 5:08pm
12th Dec 2013 2:33pm
It seems everything I thought was covered by someone's comment here so I'll just say, "tenderly touching"
n that guy is Effing lucky to have u wrapped around his finger...
n that guy is Effing lucky to have u wrapped around his finger...
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12th Dec 2013 9:15pm
beautiful write dear crim...
loved the way the whole piece progresses ... this is a very relevant piece and would connect to many of ur readers as It did to me...
especially these lines....
" talking with you
bound by lust
afraid of love"
loved it...
keep rollin
cyanide.
loved the way the whole piece progresses ... this is a very relevant piece and would connect to many of ur readers as It did to me...
especially these lines....
" talking with you
bound by lust
afraid of love"
loved it...
keep rollin
cyanide.
12th Dec 2013 9:17pm
13th Dec 2013 00:02am
Beautiful! Brenda's side I guess...
I hope my comment make you smile!
Lovely poem
I hope my comment make you smile!
Lovely poem
13th Dec 2013 7:31am
yes Cesar Brenda's side and thank you.. you did make me smile :) much love Brenda
Anonymous
14th Dec 2013 2:50am
Holy Purple!!! I've read this over time after time. I actually thought you were writing me here. Not just because of the title but because I feel this deep in me right now. Once again this has brought tears to me. This has really hit me. Great write! :)
14th Dec 2013 6:21pm
22nd Dec 2013 9:26am
Your strength again in your fragility Ms Crim. Innocence beside its intent. Really quite lovely. Thank you again Ms C.
25th Dec 2013 9:31am
The pendulum of lust and love. Beautiful vulnerable poem, Crim. Very well done.
