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fed up
Emotionally drained.
Tainted to the vein.
How would you feel if i were never to be seen again?!
Would you cry?
Would you wonder why?
OR would you wish i were still alive?
When still alive, you didnt seem to care if i were to die.!
Remember those last words you chose to say, when i throw my life away.
Please, save your apologies and lies!
'cause thier will be no time for goodbyes!
Tainted to the vein.
How would you feel if i were never to be seen again?!
Would you cry?
Would you wonder why?
OR would you wish i were still alive?
When still alive, you didnt seem to care if i were to die.!
Remember those last words you chose to say, when i throw my life away.
Please, save your apologies and lies!
'cause thier will be no time for goodbyes!
Published 4th Feb 2011
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4th Feb 2011 9:25am
harsh and bitter, but not loosing any of its honesty which makes it all the more brutal and sourly honest.
you wrote this well and i know the feeling of being told ' i wish you would die' it kills inside.
keep it up
you wrote this well and i know the feeling of being told ' i wish you would die' it kills inside.
keep it up
4th Feb 2011 8:34pm
14th Mar 2011 2:03am
It sounds of a suicide note of sorts... but miraculous in a sick way..... in other words... I simply love it...
14th Mar 2011 2:10am
thnkss...i writen a suicide note already but havent used it yet...im waiting..for the time....
11th Jan 2012 8:08pm
