Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
5th Feb 2011 10:24pm
But I think the theme might be more coherent if you used:
"Of eyes that see"
instead of
"Of man who sees"
Worthy observation, and all advice I give is IMHO. Thanks for the read.
"Of eyes that see"
instead of
"Of man who sees"
Worthy observation, and all advice I give is IMHO. Thanks for the read.
8th Feb 2011 1:14am
