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So Gone...(My Mind Is)
Cant Sleep...
Cant eat...
Feels like my body...
is in permanent heat...
Trying.. to breathe
Yet I .. cant even see
Anything...
Except..how I want you...
Thoughts of you...
In this empty room
So Silent...
Too quiet...
Yet there's nothing ... I can do..
Everything I think about..
Leads me back to you...
My want..
has become a need
Inside my mental digression...
My need... No longer a want
Has become
An Obsession...
and I cant even breathe
Nothing moving in this room
Expect...
This Icecube...
Melting in my hands...
Leaving its story
and steam... down the outline
of my breast...
Too hot you see
So I cant rest
As I dream...
Of what it be like...
Having you...
Inside Of me...
Deep...
I can barely breathe...
Yet I'm here..
all alone...
Why.. am I so gone
Over you
Afraid of being used
Been silent too long
Now... Im just confused
Got too many
Trust issues
Heart.. well its
been too abused
SO now
All thats left
All I can do
Is fantasize
about having you...
As my hands roam
acrross all my
erogenous zones....
No one but these four walls
can hear me moan...
Cause im So gone...
So Gone ...
Over you...
Yet Tears....
still escape my eyes...
As this heat swells
and makes me part my thighs...
As whats left of my icecube
melts inside the heat of me
I welcome this sweltering heat
Making me
Taking me
I am delirious
fever has taken over
How... I need you lover...
Yet when I open my eyes
I discover...
I'm still alone...
My mind is...
So Gone
Im so Gone
Gone
Over You....
Cant eat...
Feels like my body...
is in permanent heat...
Trying.. to breathe
Yet I .. cant even see
Anything...
Except..how I want you...
Thoughts of you...
In this empty room
So Silent...
Too quiet...
Yet there's nothing ... I can do..
Everything I think about..
Leads me back to you...
My want..
has become a need
Inside my mental digression...
My need... No longer a want
Has become
An Obsession...
and I cant even breathe
Nothing moving in this room
Expect...
This Icecube...
Melting in my hands...
Leaving its story
and steam... down the outline
of my breast...
Too hot you see
So I cant rest
As I dream...
Of what it be like...
Having you...
Inside Of me...
Deep...
I can barely breathe...
Yet I'm here..
all alone...
Why.. am I so gone
Over you
Afraid of being used
Been silent too long
Now... Im just confused
Got too many
Trust issues
Heart.. well its
been too abused
SO now
All thats left
All I can do
Is fantasize
about having you...
As my hands roam
acrross all my
erogenous zones....
No one but these four walls
can hear me moan...
Cause im So gone...
So Gone ...
Over you...
Yet Tears....
still escape my eyes...
As this heat swells
and makes me part my thighs...
As whats left of my icecube
melts inside the heat of me
I welcome this sweltering heat
Making me
Taking me
I am delirious
fever has taken over
How... I need you lover...
Yet when I open my eyes
I discover...
I'm still alone...
My mind is...
So Gone
Im so Gone
Gone
Over You....
Published 10th Dec 2013
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10th Dec 2013 1:53am
11th Dec 2013 1:29am
Anonymous
10th Dec 2013 4:24am
Very sexy, very true. I feel for you. And I myself am here! I look forward to more of your writes!
11th Dec 2013 1:30am
I appreciate your relation to my feelings here....
Kindred spirits abound!
XOXO
Fire
Kindred spirits abound!
XOXO
Fire
10th Dec 2013 8:12pm
11th Dec 2013 1:30am
Thank U Natural.....
I felt this poem deeper than I wanted too actually.
Thank You so much for reading it.
Fire
I felt this poem deeper than I wanted too actually.
Thank You so much for reading it.
Fire
Anonymous
10th Dec 2013 10:02pm
Well done 6ire! I felt the longing throughout..sensual with such yearning..write on!
11th Dec 2013 1:31am
Mikki.... I think somewhere along the line Yearning has become a large part of my emotional database!
Thank u so much for reading!
Fire
Thank u so much for reading!
Fire
12th Dec 2013 4:33pm
12th Dec 2013 5:49pm
You have delivered a piece that displays emotions of pure passion. The want and need of that special person, to only realize the thought of person is distant in memory. Love it my friend!
8th Jan 2014 1:11am
6th Feb 2014 8:16pm
Your pen flows as easy as the melted ice on sultry hot wanting curves, effortlessly moving in and out of lusty poetic lines that float in a sea of emotions and fears. Great read
