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OPEN IT ( on Christmas )
Christmas morning was a surprise seeing a gold full length mirror and a big green box with red bow. It being early and you being nosy, you open it. Thinking I'm sleep, I hide quietly to see your reaction. I hear you giggle and say "OH Shit". Removing the tissue paper, you adjust your body, getting moist from excitement. Gorgeous lingerie, sheer bra and panty sets, garters, six inch heels, robes, see through gowns and sexy belly chains filled the box. Right away you had your own fashion show. Everything fit and looked perfect like they were meant too be there. The way you looked at your sexy self mirror side, made you HOT as you caress now hard nipples through the sheer. Pull panties over butter soft thighs, to discover they were crotchless. With a teasing giggle, you suck a finger and rub your honeypot. A sexy moan escapes your just licked lips, while I'm turning concrete watching. Catching feelings, you taste yourself then back to tease that more than ready clit, with you easing too the floor. As one hand squeezes a heaving breast, you ease two fingers intoo your drenched temple. Pretty fingers are slick, wet and full of sticky honey after cumming eight times in an hour. Pinching nipples with eyes closed working up too nine, I strip and get ready to have a taste of sexy you with my greedy tongue. Spread eagle on the floor, I snake my way between beautiful thighs and with a long sweet lick from ass too appetite, gorgeous you stop dead in your tracks. Breathing real hard refocusing eyes from being rolled back. Thanking me for the mirror and box, I tell you how sexy you look from behind the couch. With a playful slap and a hot kiss, I ease down too your honeypot. And before I stick my greedy tongue inside you, I use two fingers too open it.
Sir Lancelott
Sir Lancelott
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Re: OPEN IT ( on Christmas )
7th Dec 2013 3:46pm
Raunchilly tempting due to the angle taken. Bravo on a finely considered work. Thanks for sharing a fine imagination. Syn
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7th Dec 2013 7:53pm
She is very lucky to have her man give her such a sexy and hot christmas present....
I will add this to my fantasy bank when I am in need of a little honeypot time...... sigh
I will add this to my fantasy bank when I am in need of a little honeypot time...... sigh
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7th Dec 2013 9:29pm
Very personal and so naughty, tisk tisk what will the children think Lance!! lol ;)
Loved it hun!
Zazz
Loved it hun!
Zazz
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8th Dec 2013 00:26am
Man I'm telling, telling you this piece is greeeeaaat! A Tony (The Tiger approval!) Love this line, "A sexy moan escapes your just licked lips, while I'm turning concrete watching." Man, you nasty!
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8th Dec 2013 1:12am
Mmmm mmmm mmmm.... mirror play can be so much fun...
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/110671-mirror-images/
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/110671-mirror-images/
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8th Dec 2013 1:30am
...this one was a little hard for me to follow babe. So much was happening all at once. Never the less, I understood this ink sexiness. ;) Pen love sweety....Xo
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