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i wept
i wept
tears flowed
on a twin bed
a mess
holding two blessings
i wept
i wept
letting my tears speak
ready to go home
pillows soaked from absorbing
that which i could no longer
retain
a plea to
just go home...
i wept til i fell asleep
encountering teddy
teddy loved me
or something of the sort
never felt that way
blissful encounter
rumbling noises
awakened
still in the same place I wept
without you
i wept
tears flowed
on a twin bed
a mess
holding two blessings
i wept
i wept
letting my tears speak
ready to go home
pillows soaked from absorbing
that which i could no longer
retain
a plea to
just go home...
i wept til i fell asleep
encountering teddy
teddy loved me
or something of the sort
never felt that way
blissful encounter
rumbling noises
awakened
still in the same place I wept
without you
Published 6th Dec 2013
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7th Dec 2013 5:29am
Weeping is good sometimes...
It is liberating to the soul
But weeping before the, "One,"
who can wrap you in, His loving
embrace is by far more liberating
and beneficial for you.
I do not say this because I do
not think you don't already know...
Just to encourage you, Blessed one
of Yahweh.
You have read the Holy Scriptures
and feel them within your soul.
Blessings from Abba unto you.
It is liberating to the soul
But weeping before the, "One,"
who can wrap you in, His loving
embrace is by far more liberating
and beneficial for you.
I do not say this because I do
not think you don't already know...
Just to encourage you, Blessed one
of Yahweh.
You have read the Holy Scriptures
and feel them within your soul.
Blessings from Abba unto you.
8th Dec 2013 00:30am
Wow! Ok your piece is powerful. Many can relate to a love lost, as you display in this poetic piece, as I read it. It ranges from a variety of experiences you can relate to in life. On why we weep for someone or something that is no longer there. Enjoyed your work of art fully.
9th Dec 2013 1:30am
19th Dec 2013 5:12pm
when relationships end it can be very hurtful. especially if youre still inlove with that person.
but if they want to leave you you shouldnt ask them to stay because love can turn into hate
but if they want to leave you you shouldnt ask them to stay because love can turn into hate
