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What I got u want
What i got u want
Looks, brains, wits, morals, cunt
Sex, freeedom, love, fun, son
Strong woman, I am a Queen
Takin the lead, I follow none but me
I dare to dream the most impossible of dreams
Never stoppin, makin them real
But one thing I forgot to tell u
I believe in me not u
I am sick of being your fool
What u got 4 me, boy?
Always bringin me down with your same ol shit
Scared of your own shadow you hide
Waiting to see the real me
Now I ask you,
Do you like what u C?
Cuz if u don't then another will C
The beauty and wonder in me
I am sick of your lies, greed, games
Suckin me dry like the last one did
But this wine only gets better with age, my friend
Like me, the best is yet to come
Now I am tired of waiting for u 2 cum along
I made up my mind, it's only a matter of time
Before I am free like a bird
Back where I belong: the open world
Now rudeboy, whatcha got 2 offer me?
Looks, brains, wits, morals, cunt
Sex, freeedom, love, fun, son
Strong woman, I am a Queen
Takin the lead, I follow none but me
I dare to dream the most impossible of dreams
Never stoppin, makin them real
But one thing I forgot to tell u
I believe in me not u
I am sick of being your fool
What u got 4 me, boy?
Always bringin me down with your same ol shit
Scared of your own shadow you hide
Waiting to see the real me
Now I ask you,
Do you like what u C?
Cuz if u don't then another will C
The beauty and wonder in me
I am sick of your lies, greed, games
Suckin me dry like the last one did
But this wine only gets better with age, my friend
Like me, the best is yet to come
Now I am tired of waiting for u 2 cum along
I made up my mind, it's only a matter of time
Before I am free like a bird
Back where I belong: the open world
Now rudeboy, whatcha got 2 offer me?
Published 1st Feb 2011
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1st Feb 2011 9:27pm
1st Feb 2011 9:40pm
not sure if anyone has covered this, but whilst the rules should be broken, I think it's fair to say that text-speak doesn't make much of a poem. See, you, ing. You know what I'm saying, try not to get bogged down in this whole shit on language group that make up 70% of western civilisation.
1st Feb 2011 10:01pm
thank u freakin love it for compliment and erm... re your comment, well i don't think of the world as west vs east (i have the one world mentality) n when i write a poem i write down what i hear in my lil ol head! thnks for info thou i didn't know 70% of "west" spoke like me (i am from another planet n just visiting your (our) world) ;) so cool that ya'll speak like me!!! OMG!!!!! WOW!!!
1st Feb 2011 10:06pm
Mel, I'd love to actually read the piece but I really can't get into the mispelling of things, that's not a dig just you might be good but I don't really want to read the 'C' word for 'see' it damns the English/American language that I, personally, think is beautiful. 'C' is the grade I got on my Mathematics GSCE it is not 'see'. Thank you.
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1st Feb 2011 10:49pm
"Like OMG!! I C U! WOW!!". This is not a cellphone and I'm pretty sure you are not a 12 year old prancing around in a tutu. Your poem really would sound better without random numbers and letters invading it.
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