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Re: Anyway
28th Nov 2013 12:57pm
Aaaawwwww this makes me feels sad...hope it's only
you being creative my sweetness. :(
you being creative my sweetness. :(
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re: Re: Anyway
28th Nov 2013 1:54pm
Re: Anyway
Anonymous
28th Nov 2013 4:34pm
Ms Chi i"m sending hugz your way but its a cycle of life and fortunately hope always lingers on with promises.
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re: Re: Anyway
28th Nov 2013 8:57pm
I appreciate your hugz warmly Vee and would like to thank you for comforting me. Life goes on ...
Re: Anyway
28th Nov 2013 5:28pm
that's so sadly, beautifully
put...but I wish it hadn't
needed to be written...x
put...but I wish it hadn't
needed to be written...x
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re: Re: Anyway
28th Nov 2013 7:33pm
I know what you mean, Paul
but someone should be entirely glad
that I've written the poem instead
of kicking his balls.
Thank you, by the way :-).
but someone should be entirely glad
that I've written the poem instead
of kicking his balls.
Thank you, by the way :-).
Re: Anyway
Anonymous
28th Nov 2013 6:19pm
OH, Damn! Iris my dear friend I'm so sorry to read this :( I'm sorry that you need to go through this.
Its a well done little write my friend but I hesitate to like it because of the subject matter :(
BIG warm Hugzzz :) xooox
Its a well done little write my friend but I hesitate to like it because of the subject matter :(
BIG warm Hugzzz :) xooox
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re: Re: Anyway
My heart embraces your BIG warm hugzzz my dear Tom! I need them badly. No, don't like this poem, it's personalized heartache (oh GOSH, am I a drama queen or am I a drama queen!). But thanks for your precious friendship wich means so much to me!
Re: Anyway
Hugs for you too across the miles.
Stylistically the poem could be sung to the tune of the latter half of verses in The Beatle's song "Yesterday", which Anyway brought to mind. (To clarify, that which goes with the lines beginning "I believed that love was here to stay...yesterday.")
Stylistically the poem could be sung to the tune of the latter half of verses in The Beatle's song "Yesterday", which Anyway brought to mind. (To clarify, that which goes with the lines beginning "I believed that love was here to stay...yesterday.")
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re: Re: Anyway
28th Nov 2013 9:46pm
Your hugs are warmly welcomed across the English Channel :-)! Not so many miles ... Thank you Solomon! xo
Yesterday ... now I need a place to hide away.
Yesterday ... now I need a place to hide away.
Re: Anyway
29th Nov 2013 5:24am
the connection to your heart can't be broken, Chi. let your poem be encased in a crystal teardrop. (so when your period of depression is over, you wanna go out with me for a chocolate soda?)...
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re: Re: Anyway
29th Nov 2013 6:53am
Chocolate soda ... I'd like that :-)!
Thanks for the invitation!
So poetic your answer, John.
"Let your poem be encased in a crystal teardrop". That's far better than my poem :-)!
Thank you!
Thanks for the invitation!
So poetic your answer, John.
"Let your poem be encased in a crystal teardrop". That's far better than my poem :-)!
Thank you!
Re: Anyway
29th Nov 2013 4:39pm
Sending Big Hugs Sweet Chiyo...I am so sorry to know this is for true...:(
And I adore John's Beautiful words!!
And I adore John's Beautiful words!!
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re: Re: Anyway
29th Nov 2013 6:08pm
Thank you so much for your big hugs and your comforting words! And you are right to adore John's beautiful words, I agree with you!
Re: Anyway
29th Nov 2013 6:11pm
I can give the all-clear :-).
Thanks to all of you for your support!
Happy again! Uäh - drama queen ...
Hugs back to you all and kisses, too :-D!
<3
Thanks to all of you for your support!
Happy again! Uäh - drama queen ...
Hugs back to you all and kisses, too :-D!
<3
Re: Anyway
30th Nov 2013 6:33am
re: Re: Anyway
30th Nov 2013 4:25pm
Thank you so much, Sara :-).
It's not my favorite since
I hate to have those feelings
but I'm glad you like it!
It's not my favorite since
I hate to have those feelings
but I'm glad you like it!
Re: Anyway
Anonymous
30th Nov 2013 9:49am
Amazingly subtle write....
Joining the hug parade sending you warm hugs as well!!!!
Joining the hug parade sending you warm hugs as well!!!!
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re: Re: Anyway
30th Nov 2013 4:27pm
Warmly welcome to the parade, dear Liz!
I'd like to hug you back!
Happy you like it!
I'd like to hug you back!
Happy you like it!
Re: Anyway
Anonymous
30th Nov 2013 9:44pm
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re: Re: Anyway
30th Nov 2013 9:50pm
What yearns to be filled??? The living void?
I wish I'd understand that part :-(.
But thanks for the lovely honesty :-).
I wish I'd understand that part :-(.
But thanks for the lovely honesty :-).
Re: Anyway
3rd Dec 2013 6:51pm
Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding. Such a sad poem, but within an acknowledgement.
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re: Re: Anyway
3rd Dec 2013 7:25pm
Such a thoughtful and understanding
comment, dear J.! You know what
I'm talking of ...
Thanks for your emotional support!
comment, dear J.! You know what
I'm talking of ...
Thanks for your emotional support!
Re: Anyway
16th Jan 2014 4:25am
So much in the perfect choice of words. You always catch me Ms Chi. Always. Your a soldier. I thank you.
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re: Re: Anyway
16th Jan 2014 7:18pm
I thank YOU, Twitch! A soldier. Maybe. Always marching on after having been down.
re: re: Re: Anyway
17th Jan 2014 8:13am
Sometimes that's all a soldier must do. Get back up and keep walking. All power Miss Chi.
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17th Jan 2014 1:29pm