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Poetic Waters
In the depths
of poetic waters
I feel myself drowning
in your magnetic verse
mesmerizing lines
intoxicate and enflame
the strings of my heart
played like a violin
in your concerto
of romantic lust
falling into
the flames
blazing their
way across my skin
licking a path to my soul
restlessly I crave
your style and sex
so sensually executed
singeing my mind
engulfed I swim
to the shores
of contentment
and rest from
the heat that is you
of poetic waters
I feel myself drowning
in your magnetic verse
mesmerizing lines
intoxicate and enflame
the strings of my heart
played like a violin
in your concerto
of romantic lust
falling into
the flames
blazing their
way across my skin
licking a path to my soul
restlessly I crave
your style and sex
so sensually executed
singeing my mind
engulfed I swim
to the shores
of contentment
and rest from
the heat that is you
Published 27th Nov 2013
| Edited 18th May 2016
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A literary grace is placed in your wake, Ms. Crim.. Beauty shows their fire in your words of desire:)~
27th Nov 2013 5:34pm
27th Nov 2013 5:23pm
Damn!! Beautiful. I'm loving your work soooo much, Crim. Keep it up, you poetic goddess :) 10/10!
27th Nov 2013 5:35pm
thank you Jonathan making me smile wide with your rating and comment :) much love Crim
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27th Nov 2013 6:33pm
Goodness! This is sweetly beautiful
Sensual n truly very lyrically poetic!! Outstanding inky dear! :)
Sensual n truly very lyrically poetic!! Outstanding inky dear! :)
27th Nov 2013 6:42pm
thank you Poe making me smile with you lovely comment :) sorry there's a glitch and wont let me thumb up your comment right now i'll try again later.. much love Crim
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Anonymous
28th Nov 2013 00:28am
Bren the whole piece is so beautiful! such a tranquil sweet wet dream feels like.
I especially love these lines:
restlessly I crave
your style and sex
so sensually executed
singing my mind
a certain add to my list! :)
I especially love these lines:
restlessly I crave
your style and sex
so sensually executed
singing my mind
a certain add to my list! :)
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Anonymous
28th Nov 2013 2:13am
This is wonderfully written. I know there's many of us caught up in this same kind of spell. You wrote it right...
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28th Nov 2013 9:41am
wow .. u didn't only made ur reader read it but feel it. some really deep lines that generates sparks in my head.. that line u said about ur lover playing u like a violin is just an amazing use of metaphor..love like this is rare ... u don't just love , u worship .. amazing...
keep Rollin..
cyanide...
keep Rollin..
cyanide...
29th Nov 2013 7:53pm
thank you Cyanide for the beautiful comment and making me smile :) much love Crim
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29th Nov 2013 1:09am
Wonderful and beautiful tribute to someone who makes your ink flow with grace. Excellent write! :)
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