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When that 'wave washes over...'
We made waves, as if we were water
crossin' the seas of each other's border
our hips rocked to the tune of soft sighs
we fondled the magic of sweetest bliss,
our highs
As fingers made
moans slip pass
moistened lips with each dip
cuddlin' as toes curl
from whispers sass
two tongues vyin' to taste every sip
Marked shoulders with teeth imprints
rockin' as our rhythm drove us deeper
heavin' chests, exhalin' another's thrust went
Joyous hands tremble...
those curvaceously round hips I grip her
Wrenching screams from my tongue
while embedding nails in the arch
this fantasy so deviantly far we've flung
it's a shared passion we each spark
enterin' in your back as each throbbing thrust
brought me closer to heaven
I keep long strokin' enflamed with lust
that's us, baby n' I from dusk til seven
Pleading I begin to beg her so softly
lips touch earlobe and with a whisper..
"wonder where next goes our mix-of-we?"
finished, we fall into satisfaction's bank,
as then deeply, I kiss her...
crossin' the seas of each other's border
our hips rocked to the tune of soft sighs
we fondled the magic of sweetest bliss,
our highs
As fingers made
moans slip pass
moistened lips with each dip
cuddlin' as toes curl
from whispers sass
two tongues vyin' to taste every sip
Marked shoulders with teeth imprints
rockin' as our rhythm drove us deeper
heavin' chests, exhalin' another's thrust went
Joyous hands tremble...
those curvaceously round hips I grip her
Wrenching screams from my tongue
while embedding nails in the arch
this fantasy so deviantly far we've flung
it's a shared passion we each spark
enterin' in your back as each throbbing thrust
brought me closer to heaven
I keep long strokin' enflamed with lust
that's us, baby n' I from dusk til seven
Pleading I begin to beg her so softly
lips touch earlobe and with a whisper..
"wonder where next goes our mix-of-we?"
finished, we fall into satisfaction's bank,
as then deeply, I kiss her...
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Re: When that 'wave washes over...'
22nd Nov 2013 3:43pm
kinda feels like an excellent rap lyric...
looking at the rhymes u have used through out..some tight rhymes there in between some of the bars ..very interesting .. the piece has got a very nice flow like its title. the sensual feelings are riding high as well.. but wait ..oh! check the pic out..I'd suggest u to put that on extreme content...
write on ..
cyanide..
looking at the rhymes u have used through out..some tight rhymes there in between some of the bars ..very interesting .. the piece has got a very nice flow like its title. the sensual feelings are riding high as well.. but wait ..oh! check the pic out..I'd suggest u to put that on extreme content...
write on ..
cyanide..
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re: Re: When that 'wave washes over...'
22nd Nov 2013 3:51pm
Ooooohhh damn ur right bro! lol I slipped up n good looking out kid! Thanks for the amazing n always generous commentary n support :)
Re: When that 'wave washes over...'
22nd Nov 2013 3:49pm
so very sensually and powerfully erotic written in such a beautiful way!!! much love Crim
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re: Re: When that 'wave washes over...'
22nd Nov 2013 3:54pm
Thank you my sweetheart, happy to know you liked
n deeply grateful for your support always :)
n deeply grateful for your support always :)
Re: When that 'wave washes over...'
22nd Nov 2013 4:49pm
I see you drawing skills at work and I must say well matched to your piece! Go boy!
Red
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re: Re: When that 'wave washes over...'
22nd Nov 2013 5:44pm
Aaaaawww thank you my sweet Gypsy!
Happy you approve! Appreciate u so much! :)
Happy you approve! Appreciate u so much! :)
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22nd Nov 2013 5:12pm
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22nd Nov 2013 5:49pm
Aaaawwwww I'm happy it met your highest of standards
re guarding RAW n SEXY lol muah! Appreciate ya lady :)
re guarding RAW n SEXY lol muah! Appreciate ya lady :)
Re: When that 'wave washes over...'
Anonymous
22nd Nov 2013 10:26pm
dis rappin get da boat rockin' brudda man..make de man and his lady makin waves at the sand where I stand watchin and smilin for the love drive da boat to da bank..bring it in, i got your painter :)
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re: Re: When that 'wave washes over...'
23rd Nov 2013 1:46am
Lol love ur freestyle hood style wilding out on
urban tip bro! glad you liked n grateful always :)
urban tip bro! glad you liked n grateful always :)
Re: When that 'wave washes over...'
Anonymous
23rd Nov 2013 5:16am
You know I that I think you write well in any form and lord knows - on any subject - but your love poems always grab. And I do love that drawing with this... Good stuff.
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re: Re: When that 'wave washes over...'
23rd Nov 2013 5:24am
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23rd Nov 2013 2:52pm
This was such a beautiful read. The wordplay was appreciated greatly. Xoxo
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23rd Nov 2013 2:58pm
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24th Nov 2013 11:09pm
Mmmm I love satisfying you sexy! lol
Thank you always for ur wonderful comment n support :)
Thank you always for ur wonderful comment n support :)
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27th Nov 2013 10:15pm
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28th Nov 2013 1:14pm
Hey sweetie! Wow I'm blushing! lol thank u so very much, truly appreciate ur thoughts n support :)