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Years
Years of verbal abuse
One day will be just enough
To tighten my noose
Years of being torn down
My name may mean queen
But I ain't got no crown
Years have gone by
Barely anything has changed
Same silent nightly cry
Same old tired game
Years of not being good enough
Here's to a few more of not giving a fuck!
One day will be just enough
To tighten my noose
Years of being torn down
My name may mean queen
But I ain't got no crown
Years have gone by
Barely anything has changed
Same silent nightly cry
Same old tired game
Years of not being good enough
Here's to a few more of not giving a fuck!
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Re: Years
21st Nov 2013 1:24am
You have a ways to go...you will be someone loved and admired someday...actually been there too. :))
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re: Re: Years
21st Nov 2013 1:30am
I'm just holding on to the fact I'll be able to move out someday.
Thanks for the encouragement :)
Thanks for the encouragement :)
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Anonymous
21st Nov 2013 2:55am
Oh Kitty, we all know you deserve better and you know it deep down inside as well. You will know when the time comes and when you're ready, dont ever give up.
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Re: Years
21st Nov 2013 3:27am
I agree with Idryad and Vee whole heartedly! :)
This deep anger was written beautifully, Kitty! Xo
This deep anger was written beautifully, Kitty! Xo
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Re: Years
21st Nov 2013 5:33am
three amazing women have given you wonderful feedback, not much to add to.
Love the raw emotion you display xo stay strong.
Love the raw emotion you display xo stay strong.
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21st Nov 2013 8:01pm
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Re: Years
23rd Nov 2013 4:29pm
Touched me to the marrow.
The second stanza is my favorite.
Stand up for yourself and
hey! your poems show that
you verbally can fight back!
Wish you strength xoxo.
The second stanza is my favorite.
Stand up for yourself and
hey! your poems show that
you verbally can fight back!
Wish you strength xoxo.
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