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Gemini
I miss you
you're not talking
to me
i'm not sure
what I've done
to earn your silence
maybe you think I've
gone soft so i'll put on
the street for you
poetic soul
with a heart of gold
weaving truth
with your dark
stories on the streets
of Chicago
taking me into
the ghettos
scoring with you
so real is your art
from the soul
i'm shooting up with you
as you take yourself
down nice and slow
story telling genius
the Gemini, the twins
that you are,
able to speak-
in many voices,
captivating
so many with
your gritty tales
of life running it tough
street lingo you've taught me
reeling me in
with your stories
of living life hard
painting landscapes
for me to get lost in
as your story unfolds before me
tough yet tender of heart
smart an intellectual demon
who mesmerizes me with your ink
writing to you
from the soul
with love Crimsin
(Great to hear you've been busy with your novel.. rock on Gemini :)
you're not talking
to me
i'm not sure
what I've done
to earn your silence
maybe you think I've
gone soft so i'll put on
the street for you
poetic soul
with a heart of gold
weaving truth
with your dark
stories on the streets
of Chicago
taking me into
the ghettos
scoring with you
so real is your art
from the soul
i'm shooting up with you
as you take yourself
down nice and slow
story telling genius
the Gemini, the twins
that you are,
able to speak-
in many voices,
captivating
so many with
your gritty tales
of life running it tough
street lingo you've taught me
reeling me in
with your stories
of living life hard
painting landscapes
for me to get lost in
as your story unfolds before me
tough yet tender of heart
smart an intellectual demon
who mesmerizes me with your ink
writing to you
from the soul
with love Crimsin
(Great to hear you've been busy with your novel.. rock on Gemini :)
Written by
crimsin
(Unveiling)
Published 20th Nov 2013
| Edited 21st Nov 2013
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Re: Gemini
20th Nov 2013 5:46pm
WOW, this Gemini you wrote for should be over the moon with joy! This was a truly remarkable dedication n showed a lot of love expressed thru your ink... Outstanding stuff lady :)
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re: Re: Gemini
thank you Poe for such an awesome comment.. touching my heart :) much love Crim
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20th Nov 2013 5:57pm
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20th Nov 2013 5:59pm
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20th Nov 2013 7:49pm
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20th Nov 2013 8:37pm
being a Gemini can be tough. I am one and people just don't understand how diverse I can be, how random to how hating then loving I can be. great write my lovely poet. well done.
emo1
emo1
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re: Re: Gemini
20th Nov 2013 8:46pm
thank you lovely Emo1 yes Gemini's are diverse great to know you are one.. twin souls beautiful.. thank you again for your visit :) much love Crim
Re: Gemini
20th Nov 2013 9:32pm
your poem is very street-tough, Brenda, true to his style, I think. strong friendships are formed here in the underground...
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I am an ex junkie as well so I understand a lot of what he talks about the difference is he's from a big city and i'm not.. so in his novel which I've had the great pleasure of reading some.. I've learned a lot about how things go down when you are a dope fiend in Chicago.. yes I consider him a very close friend.. though he is busy else where these days.. thank you John for the thoughtful comment.. much love Crim :)
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20th Nov 2013 10:29pm
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20th Nov 2013 10:44pm
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Anonymous
20th Nov 2013 10:34pm
What a wonderful tribute this is. I can relate to this so much. Tears fall as I read this once again. This really struck my heart. Hope he comes around to you again soon. :)
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re: Re: Gemini
20th Nov 2013 10:47pm
thank you beautiful Flower.. you touched my heart with your comment.. thank you for your thoughtful concern we talked this morning :) much love Crim
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21st Nov 2013 1:07am
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21st Nov 2013 1:19am
Re: Gemini
Oh my God! I am so honored I'm speechless! Just so you know, I've been busy the past few days. That's why you've not heard from me. This is going on my reading list, never to be deleted from it. Wow! Just, Wow!
Gemini (your muse)
Gemini (your muse)
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Gemini I love your writing you take me to the streets of Chicago with your writes.. i'm honored you put this on your reading list.. I tried to thumb up your comment but damn glitch won't allow me to.. I understand you being busy just missed you was all :) much love Crim
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Anonymous
21st Nov 2013 3:34am
Really wonderful ink, love. Glad to see he appreciates it...
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re: Re: Gemini
21st Nov 2013 3:47am
thank you Petit making me smile with your comment.. yeah he's a good guy forgives my insecurities :) much love Crim
Re: Gemini
21st Nov 2013 10:24pm
I can relate to so much of your writing and this is another good example of taking the harsh things we've seen in the past and making something beautiful of it, with inspiration. I love this!
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21st Nov 2013 10:36pm
Re: Gemini
22nd Nov 2013 1:20am
Gotta watch those Gems. their double trouble ;)
Excellent Write Dear Crim!!!
Excellent Write Dear Crim!!!
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22nd Nov 2013 7:09am
Re: Gemini
28th Dec 2013 5:56am
And here lies the romance in pain and struggle Ms Crim. I do love to witness true cause and effect. Gritty with emotion. Lovely. Thank you.
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