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Wasted Hate
Most of you in this world are simply not worthy
Of my hatred
It requires too much energy
If I held on to it
I fear it would destroy me
As it is a truly toxic substance
If held onto, it can tear away at your very soul
Leaving all your energy drained
A hard lesson learned
But through meditation
And writing
I have found a way to redirect my negative energies
Forgiveness is much more brave
Than holding a grudge
Sure to corrode from the inside out
Of my hatred
It requires too much energy
If I held on to it
I fear it would destroy me
As it is a truly toxic substance
If held onto, it can tear away at your very soul
Leaving all your energy drained
A hard lesson learned
But through meditation
And writing
I have found a way to redirect my negative energies
Forgiveness is much more brave
Than holding a grudge
Sure to corrode from the inside out
Published 20th Nov 2013
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20th Nov 2013 6:58am
20th Nov 2013 7:02am
20th Nov 2013 4:54pm
' Forgiveness is.much easier
Than holding a grudge
Sure to corrode from the inside out'
I respect your beautiful thought but I'd rather say forgiveness is more brave than holding a grudge.. forgiveness is an element that not many of us have if it would have then this world would have been a better place..im glad its easier for ya to forgive than to hate...
the humble side of ya is shinning on my screen... but one very minute error (unintentional one probably) that I'd like to point out is on the last stanza there is a dot between 'is' and 'much' that I'd kindly ask u to edit...
beautiful write except that .. thank u for sharing
keep writing
cyanide...
Than holding a grudge
Sure to corrode from the inside out'
I respect your beautiful thought but I'd rather say forgiveness is more brave than holding a grudge.. forgiveness is an element that not many of us have if it would have then this world would have been a better place..im glad its easier for ya to forgive than to hate...
the humble side of ya is shinning on my screen... but one very minute error (unintentional one probably) that I'd like to point out is on the last stanza there is a dot between 'is' and 'much' that I'd kindly ask u to edit...
beautiful write except that .. thank u for sharing
keep writing
cyanide...
20th Nov 2013 6:18pm
20th Nov 2013 6:17pm
20th Nov 2013 6:33pm
Much thanks, Crim. I am once again honored by your visit. :3
Regards,
Sir...
Regards,
Sir...
