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'Tearing out thy eye sockets'
Something...
gelled into me
a torturous swell
felled my soul
it ain't right...
too dark inside,
those eyes see
inevitable plight
since I can't
find the switch
I'm devoid of light...
I think
this time is it,
I've no more fight
I'm wingless,
so I can't
ascend to
higher heights...
marking my way
from a memory
I hear agonies...
embittered pangs
such is the sorrow
left in me
a web of
'abstract colored visions'
turned a sepia hue
whilst' I try to beat back
the darkness,
it's all that I can do...
gelled into me
a torturous swell
felled my soul
it ain't right...
too dark inside,
those eyes see
inevitable plight
since I can't
find the switch
I'm devoid of light...
I think
this time is it,
I've no more fight
I'm wingless,
so I can't
ascend to
higher heights...
marking my way
from a memory
I hear agonies...
embittered pangs
such is the sorrow
left in me
a web of
'abstract colored visions'
turned a sepia hue
whilst' I try to beat back
the darkness,
it's all that I can do...
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Re: 'Tearing out thy eye sockets'
17th Nov 2013 3:31pm
been through this kinda stuff a lot I can relate to it .. intensely traumatising words combined with some 'fighting back' attitude in a gloomy cave .... loved ur ink .. u may be wingless though ur pen ain't ....
keep scribbling
cyanide...
keep scribbling
cyanide...
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re: Re: 'Tearing out thy eye sockets'
17th Nov 2013 3:45pm
Wow bro. I'm sorry to hear you know this so well
but just goes to show, we always feel like
no one knows only to learn we have so much in common huh? Thanks a ton bro. Truly :)
but just goes to show, we always feel like
no one knows only to learn we have so much in common huh? Thanks a ton bro. Truly :)
Re: 'Tearing out thy eye sockets'
17th Nov 2013 4:20pm
re: Re: 'Tearing out thy eye sockets'
17th Nov 2013 4:27pm
Thank you my dear, so sweet u are... :) forever grateful I am for your support :)
Re: 'Tearing out thy eye sockets'
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17th Nov 2013 5:11pm
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re: Re: 'Tearing out thy eye sockets'
17th Nov 2013 5:19pm
Lmao wow... U got me blushing big time!
Easily the most heated commented ever lol
Thank you so much sexy :)
Easily the most heated commented ever lol
Thank you so much sexy :)
Re: 'Tearing out thy eye sockets'
17th Nov 2013 6:00pm
Wow that stirred so many, in some unexpected ways..always a good thing though.. pat yourself once again on your back!
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re: Re: 'Tearing out thy eye sockets'
17th Nov 2013 6:10pm
If it moved YOU, happy n yea pat pat as I sat with a big smile
pon my grill lol thank u sweetheart :)
pon my grill lol thank u sweetheart :)
Re: 'Tearing out thy eye sockets'
17th Nov 2013 6:14pm
A moving piece, that will definitely have you searching for for more. Great work of art!
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re: Re: 'Tearing out thy eye sockets'
17th Nov 2013 6:22pm
Thank you bro! I was just about to leave this page when I saw this seemingly 'pop' up lol
Appreciate ya much dude :)
Appreciate ya much dude :)
Re: 'Tearing out thy eye sockets'
17th Nov 2013 8:18pm
re: Re: 'Tearing out thy eye sockets'
18th Nov 2013 1:28am
Thank you! So gracious you are my Gypsy, I'm smiling wide :)
Truly appreciate you! :)
Truly appreciate you! :)
Re: 'Tearing out thy eye sockets'
17th Nov 2013 8:42pm
re: Re: 'Tearing out thy eye sockets'
18th Nov 2013 1:28am
Re: 'Tearing out thy eye sockets'
17th Nov 2013 9:12pm
Gripping scribe, Poe.
This poem gives your sentiment
a captivating frame. Love it!
This poem gives your sentiment
a captivating frame. Love it!
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re: Re: 'Tearing out thy eye sockets'
18th Nov 2013 1:30am
Aaaawww sweetie! Thank you so much my dear sweetness!
Happy you liked this ink :)
Happy you liked this ink :)
Re: 'Tearing out thy eye sockets'
Anonymous
18th Nov 2013 2:56pm
I have been beating back the darkness for so long...this poem speaks for so many.
Well penned
Peace
Kitty
Well penned
Peace
Kitty

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Re: 'Tearing out thy eye sockets'
18th Nov 2013 3:12pm
Kitty I'm sorry to hear you been in that darkness
I pray each day u see more light... Thank u for your
Unwavering support, I adore u! :)
I pray each day u see more light... Thank u for your
Unwavering support, I adore u! :)
Re: 'Tearing out thy eye sockets'
18th Nov 2013 9:16pm
Damn! You can be scary when you want to! Tearing folks eyes out and ish! Just violent, I tell ya! lol.....
Cleverly dark hun...Xo
Cleverly dark hun...Xo
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re: Re: 'Tearing out thy eye sockets'
20th Nov 2013 00:52am
Lmao nah, this was nothing violent
it was just the title that seemed violent lol
Appreciate you my dear!
it was just the title that seemed violent lol
Appreciate you my dear!