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Razor's Edge
Razor's edge pressed to my throat
A thin line of crimson
Words bleeding onto the page.
Feelings swirled in blood
Making an abstract poem
One born of pain.
Razor slashes deep at my heart
Anger makes it gush
Bleeding out my rage.
Red takes center stage
Filling my days, my nights
With fantasies I can't control.
Part of me so evil
Wanting to let go
I stand tottering on the razor's edge.
Soon will come sweet death
I will swim in the abyss
With my lover, who knows me best.
A thin line of crimson
Words bleeding onto the page.
Feelings swirled in blood
Making an abstract poem
One born of pain.
Razor slashes deep at my heart
Anger makes it gush
Bleeding out my rage.
Red takes center stage
Filling my days, my nights
With fantasies I can't control.
Part of me so evil
Wanting to let go
I stand tottering on the razor's edge.
Soon will come sweet death
I will swim in the abyss
With my lover, who knows me best.
Published 25th Jan 2011
| Edited 7th Apr 2013
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Anonymous
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23rd Dec 2014 4:05am
you are an amazing poet DaddyPhantom I'm truly touched and honored that you see me in such a light thank you with love and respect Crimsin
31st Dec 2017 5:59pm
The talent you have of transforming your mind into art is amazing. I love this work. When I read it its as if the words where crimson like blood.
2nd Jan 2018 8:44pm
23rd Jun 2018 3:34pm
red upon red upon red..
as i read this..totally immersed
in the deep and meaningful
strokes of this vibe..
as i read this..totally immersed
in the deep and meaningful
strokes of this vibe..
23rd Jun 2018 3:40pm
thank you graciously Soul Soldier for feeling the vibe of one of my very first writes :)
love Crim
love Crim
12th Feb 2019 2:42am
A thousand little deaths make a life worth living? To the french yes ... Caught me ... a recurring theme ... Bless and love ...
12th Feb 2019 2:44am
thank you dearest Fenyx for digging deep this is my first I think I posted here...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
12th Feb 2019 2:50am
I read the first 3 of all whose words capture me ... but alas not so deeply as you dear Crimson Sin ... If I may ... Bless and love ...
12th Feb 2019 2:54am
my user name is derived from the color+crime+sin so it is apt you would call me that 💕
12th Feb 2019 2:55am
Anonymous
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18th Jun 2020 2:54pm
wow this is an old one from when I first started to write thank you for such an awesome comment ❤
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18th Jun 2020 3:01pm
Anonymous
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18th Jun 2020 4:38pm
you know my journey began with deep anxiety I had to create or burst before I started writing I painted now I do a bit of both you surely just might poet ❤
27th Aug 2021 1:36pm
Now I know where the "Crimsin" comes from. :)))
(I thought it was something like that.;)
Awesome & Amazing.
(I thought it was something like that.;)
Awesome & Amazing.
27th Aug 2021 4:05pm
good morning dearest Cipher thank you this is an old one yes crimsin=crime and sin kind of play on words....
23rd Jul 2022 3:03pm
