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Invisible Eyes
Invisible eyes watch me
Disect me, talk to me
With muted mouths
Barely heard above
A whisper.
I don't wish any evil to linger but it does
Like a cloud over my head
Pushing and prodding
Until I connect with them.
Invisible eyes so greedily feasting
Always want a show
Love it when i'm grieving.
Invisible ears always listening
Know when i'm afraid
On the inside trembling.
Invisible tongues
Cut me like razors
Their words so vicious
I see their maker.
He doesn't have
Invisible eyes, they're grey and dead as coal
Darkness shines bright and reveals his soul.
He sent the ones
With the unending appettite
For lust, sex and betrayel.
The ones with the invisible eyes
Hateful, ungrateful liers and decievers
Thieves of the heart and mind.
Stop,
I'm poking out
Those invisible eyes.
Disect me, talk to me
With muted mouths
Barely heard above
A whisper.
I don't wish any evil to linger but it does
Like a cloud over my head
Pushing and prodding
Until I connect with them.
Invisible eyes so greedily feasting
Always want a show
Love it when i'm grieving.
Invisible ears always listening
Know when i'm afraid
On the inside trembling.
Invisible tongues
Cut me like razors
Their words so vicious
I see their maker.
He doesn't have
Invisible eyes, they're grey and dead as coal
Darkness shines bright and reveals his soul.
He sent the ones
With the unending appettite
For lust, sex and betrayel.
The ones with the invisible eyes
Hateful, ungrateful liers and decievers
Thieves of the heart and mind.
Stop,
I'm poking out
Those invisible eyes.
Published 26th Jan 2011
| Edited 27th Dec 2017
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Anonymous
20th Feb 2011 2:01am
I love the ending. Changes the whole outlook on the poem from being the victim to standing up for yourself. All the power to you. :]
18th Dec 2014 3:26am
I love it when a poetess can express her dismay through witty metaphors. "Darkness shines bright and reveals his soul". Wicked verse Poetess. Effortless complicity, soothes this savage beast.
18th Dec 2014 5:32pm
thank you DaddyPhantom I take that as a deep compliment coming from a poet as talented as you.. with love and respect Crim :)
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27th Dec 2017 7:21pm
So, I'm going back to your earlier work, Brenda, and recognize brilliance from the outset. Your anguish so beautifully informs it becomes infectious and makes me want to join you on your battlefield.
27th Dec 2017 7:24pm
thank you dearest David
for checking out my very first writes
as a poet..
they are riddled with errors
but that I could write at all
was a miracle..
I was fresh from the psych ward
for the last time..
as it turned out writing saved me..
love Brenda
for checking out my very first writes
as a poet..
they are riddled with errors
but that I could write at all
was a miracle..
I was fresh from the psych ward
for the last time..
as it turned out writing saved me..
love Brenda
27th Dec 2017 7:37pm
Wow sweet Brenda, what you must have gone through! I'm so glad you've found yourself with your beautiful poetry.
Love to you....David
Love to you....David
12th Feb 2019 2:44am
I like your turn of position, from oppressed to avenger ... Nice write ... Bless and love ...
12th Feb 2019 2:50am
thank you graciously dearest Fenyx another old one these were very hard days...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
12th Feb 2019 2:50am
