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my heart dissected
fallen amongst the corpses
deepest rings you cast
photo taken by author
Written by
LobodeSanPedro
Published
11th Nov 2013
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PsychicApocalypse
(Darker Half)
11th Nov 2013 9:56am
Hurt by some one who has hurt so many others,
I feel the pain in this small piece!
Very Well Composed Lobo.
Your Haiku's are always the best!!
Darker
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LobodeSanPedro
12th Nov 2013 8:09am
You're totally right about the heart break and hurt element in this piece ... But your insight on others hurt by the same person added a layer I didn't see ... Thank You!
LSP
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rain1courtel
(RainC)
12th Nov 2013 2:39am
I freakin' love this, Pedro! Very nice.....Xo
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LobodeSanPedro
12th Nov 2013 8:10am
Thanks for the love Rain!
xoxo
LSP
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Anonymous
12th Nov 2013 4:36am
The picture with this small sharp write makes it a standout... you show the face of deforestation as simply as you write of it.
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LobodeSanPedro
- Edited 12th Nov 2013 8:15am
12th Nov 2013 8:14am
Wow! - deforestation ... Another insight I didn't consider in this. That's why I love this place when it's at its best.
Thank you PM.
LSP
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