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All Up To You
Would you really object if
my goal was to get you wet
body to body, torrid sex
but you won't need a safety net?
Would if be okay
if I tried to blow you mind
with touching and thrusts
and your body's erotic climb?
For just one night would be okay
if I had you all to myself
think I have what it takes to please you
no not quite ready to be put on the shelf
If that one night is to your liking
would more be a possible plan
ingrained in your memory
is that for hot manhood I am the man
Jism city is calling your name
flowing from the instrument called my dick
you knew this treat would be worthwhile
from the moment you saw just how thick
my goal was to get you wet
body to body, torrid sex
but you won't need a safety net?
Would if be okay
if I tried to blow you mind
with touching and thrusts
and your body's erotic climb?
For just one night would be okay
if I had you all to myself
think I have what it takes to please you
no not quite ready to be put on the shelf
If that one night is to your liking
would more be a possible plan
ingrained in your memory
is that for hot manhood I am the man
Jism city is calling your name
flowing from the instrument called my dick
you knew this treat would be worthwhile
from the moment you saw just how thick
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Re: All Up To You
Anonymous
7th Nov 2013 8:36pm
Jazz,
Man, you were laying it on thick! ; ) Hope she was receptive and gave it "All Up To You"!
Enjoyed!!! LOL!!!
tornado
Man, you were laying it on thick! ; ) Hope she was receptive and gave it "All Up To You"!
Enjoyed!!! LOL!!!
tornado
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re: Re: All Up To You
8th Nov 2013 3:28am
Re: All Up To You
7th Nov 2013 9:02pm
Re: All Up To You
7th Nov 2013 10:16pm
...one would think you didn't have to ask her if she'd mind if you took her to ecstasy, but since you asked nicely and leaving it all up to her to decide....
I'm sure her answer would be, No, wouldn't mind at all. Sexy ink, Ted! Xo
I'm sure her answer would be, No, wouldn't mind at all. Sexy ink, Ted! Xo
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8th Nov 2013 3:30am
Re: All Up To You
Anonymous
7th Nov 2013 11:40pm
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re: Re: All Up To You
8th Nov 2013 3:32am
for some reason they look better when quoted in a comment then when I first came up with the lines. :)
Re: All Up To You
Anonymous
8th Nov 2013 1:32am
Hot and sexy!!!!!!!!!
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Re: All Up To You
Anonymous
8th Nov 2013 4:40am
You know, I loved this poem right until the last stanza. These two lines:
"Jism city is calling your name
flowing from the instrument called my dick"
somehow seemed to not fit the style of the rest of the poem. A little too blatant for the mood set by the rest, to me.
"Jism city is calling your name
flowing from the instrument called my dick"
somehow seemed to not fit the style of the rest of the poem. A little too blatant for the mood set by the rest, to me.
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re: Re: All Up To You
8th Nov 2013 2:54pm
Re: All Up To You
8th Nov 2013 6:18am
Re: All Up To You
8th Nov 2013 7:33pm
DAMN JAZZ, way too put it down Bro.!!!
Great read, write and flow!!!
Made sense the first time!
Pen on Bro.!!!
Sir Lancelott
Great read, write and flow!!!
Made sense the first time!
Pen on Bro.!!!
Sir Lancelott
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re: Re: All Up To You
9th Nov 2013 4:47am