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Traveling
The farther one
travels the less
one goes.
But we need to travel
to journey: don't we?
Just looking out my
bedroom window I can
go to the unknown, a
hopefully positive vacation.
Don't especially need a door
or a floor.
The farther one travels
the less one goes.
travels the less
one goes.
But we need to travel
to journey: don't we?
Just looking out my
bedroom window I can
go to the unknown, a
hopefully positive vacation.
Don't especially need a door
or a floor.
The farther one travels
the less one goes.
Published 6th Nov 2013
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6th Nov 2013 8:24pm
Cool write!, most of my traveling is done through frequencies ;) no door ever needed.
9th Nov 2013 2:13pm
Frequencies? What does that mean? Is it snowing in Detroit yet? Thank you for your comments.
marcella1
marcella1
Anonymous
6th Nov 2013 8:48pm
Compact and full of wisdom!!!
9th Nov 2013 2:13pm
Anonymous
6th Nov 2013 10:09pm
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9th Nov 2013 2:15pm
Thank you for your fond words. I wonder, what does Shakespeare have to do with it?
marcella1
marcella1
Anonymous
7th Nov 2013 00:02am
Very true.
9th Nov 2013 2:17pm
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11th Nov 2013 11:13pm
The mind travels too. Not just the body.
Intricate piece marcella.
Thanks for sharing
Intricate piece marcella.
Thanks for sharing
12th Nov 2013 4:44pm
Yes. The mind even travels to unknown, unreal (which the mind may think real) places. Thanks.
marcella1
marcella1
