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With the Senses
A collaboration by Grace and Soul
Soughing winds and crashing waves
through the windows blazing sunsets
reflections on glasses
hues of rainbows in rainy days
through that all I think of you
what sees you outside your window
Golden leaves
reds with purple, dancing
winds that build like engines
yelling through the holler
coloured trail held imagery
of us, sharing, laughter, love, mystery
Music from the distant mountains
Hollow reeds and bamboo sitar
Flute blown by bee-stung lips
That I hear with inner ears
Missing the highland
and you, what do you hear
Sighs upon the Mist
in soothing bloom
where peaks and butterflies play
calling our names, again and again
the pull of enchanted tunes
striking chords, two beating hearts
Cold seems nature’s breath
Fresh caressing fingers upon my cheek
gentle warmth from lighted fire
Texture of silk on tranquil form
Cuddled soft pillows upon my chest
In your aloneness, how feel you
Quiet strings speaking endless streams
awash every moment kept in my head
cold hours touch, reaching without You
by my side, envelopes air , the nights
sigh , cuddled, pressed Persephone
mingled breath, Your eyes our stare
take a walk under the canopy
of cascading autumn leaves
letting lavish layers pulse
in waves climbed ecstasy
trusts in each other's footsteps
to lead to good 'til to beyond
prized shrine gleam and fed with fire
stood tall to shadow mountains.
Soughing winds and crashing waves
through the windows blazing sunsets
reflections on glasses
hues of rainbows in rainy days
through that all I think of you
what sees you outside your window
Golden leaves
reds with purple, dancing
winds that build like engines
yelling through the holler
coloured trail held imagery
of us, sharing, laughter, love, mystery
Music from the distant mountains
Hollow reeds and bamboo sitar
Flute blown by bee-stung lips
That I hear with inner ears
Missing the highland
and you, what do you hear
Sighs upon the Mist
in soothing bloom
where peaks and butterflies play
calling our names, again and again
the pull of enchanted tunes
striking chords, two beating hearts
Cold seems nature’s breath
Fresh caressing fingers upon my cheek
gentle warmth from lighted fire
Texture of silk on tranquil form
Cuddled soft pillows upon my chest
In your aloneness, how feel you
Quiet strings speaking endless streams
awash every moment kept in my head
cold hours touch, reaching without You
by my side, envelopes air , the nights
sigh , cuddled, pressed Persephone
mingled breath, Your eyes our stare
take a walk under the canopy
of cascading autumn leaves
letting lavish layers pulse
in waves climbed ecstasy
trusts in each other's footsteps
to lead to good 'til to beyond
prized shrine gleam and fed with fire
stood tall to shadow mountains.
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6th Nov 2013 1:45am
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Anonymous
6th Nov 2013 2:09am
Beautiful collaboration from two very talented people....enjoyed....
Kitty
Kitty
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6th Nov 2013 2:23am
Thank You so much Kitty :)
...She found that pic...I had to use it too :))) perfect!!!
...She found that pic...I had to use it too :))) perfect!!!
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6th Nov 2013 3:15am
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6th Nov 2013 3:56am
Thank You for You for Your kindness Mr A-Always appreciate Your visit Sir!!!
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Anonymous
6th Nov 2013 4:53am
Great title for this wonderful piece.
A joy for all the senses!!!
A joy for all the senses!!!
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6th Nov 2013 11:49pm
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Anonymous
6th Nov 2013 5:03am
This was a work of true beauty. Thank you both...
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6th Nov 2013 11:50pm
Re: With the Senses
6th Nov 2013 2:58pm
Such a lovely tranquil write!!! gorgeous poem you both should be proud :) peace Crim
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6th Nov 2013 11:52pm
Re: With the Senses
6th Nov 2013 2:58pm
awww....you two just connect so beautifully together with ink! This was simply stunning! Love this....Xo
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6th Nov 2013 11:53pm
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6th Nov 2013 5:02pm
I applaude the piece, a standing ovation and mind you both still standing. Great job, magnificent ink!
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6th Nov 2013 11:54pm
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6th Nov 2013 5:55pm
On rare occasions, a poem speaks directly to me. & this one definitely does. Awesome collaboration, y'all. My innards are positively bubblin' for a stroll through the glen as I type this comment...
~makes his way out-of-doors~
~makes his way out-of-doors~
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6th Nov 2013 11:56pm
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7th Nov 2013 2:52am
Flute blown by bee stung lips- fav line!!!
Bro. SOUL Great piece man!!
You still da man!!
Sir Lancelott
Bro. SOUL Great piece man!!
You still da man!!
Sir Lancelott
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7th Nov 2013 3:22am
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7th Nov 2013 12:20pm
True to your style of writing it is soothing while transporting the reader into the piece!
Red
Red
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7th Nov 2013 2:12pm
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9th Nov 2013 1:10am
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9th Nov 2013 1:20am
Hey Hash...I am Humbled You stopped by here for this, I saw You visit Grace:) You didn't have to do such a thing-VERY kind of You!!!
Re: With the Senses
10th Nov 2013 00:15am
If Vivaldi had ever met Gandalf, or Tolkien, my guess is they might have come up with something like this.
Congrats to both of you on a wonderful write.
Congrats to both of you on a wonderful write.
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10th Nov 2013 00:39am
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Anonymous
3rd Jan 2014 6:41pm
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4th Jan 2014 5:59pm
Thanks for coming By Gabriel :)
Means much that You enjoyed this-Happy New Year My Friend-May this one be a Great One!!!
Means much that You enjoyed this-Happy New Year My Friend-May this one be a Great One!!!