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The 'Watcher in the Why...'
Faded pictures
like the visions
of star dust's mass
Broken bridges
once tethered
a contrite past
Though now a revisionist
wave washes ashore the banks
of reciprocity, lingering
on foresight, the DIE is cast...
like the visions
of star dust's mass
Broken bridges
once tethered
a contrite past
Though now a revisionist
wave washes ashore the banks
of reciprocity, lingering
on foresight, the DIE is cast...
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Re: The 'Watcher in the Why...'
5th Nov 2013 1:07am
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5th Nov 2013 1:29am
Poetikmind loves that you love this! lol
n grateful for you my doll! Thank you so much
Xoxoxoxo :)
n grateful for you my doll! Thank you so much
Xoxoxoxo :)
Re: The 'Watcher in the Why...'
5th Nov 2013 1:55am
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5th Nov 2013 2:07am
Re: The 'Watcher in the Why...'
Anonymous
5th Nov 2013 2:46am
Sometimes the bridges should be broken from the past otherwise we can't move forward.
Poignant piece PIKM, makes me think of many things.
Poignant piece PIKM, makes me think of many things.
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re: Re: The 'Watcher in the Why...'
5th Nov 2013 3:03am
Thank you precious, yea I agree with you
n I'm always truly grateful for your support :)
n I'm always truly grateful for your support :)
Re: The 'Watcher in the Why...'
5th Nov 2013 4:30am
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5th Nov 2013 3:17pm
Re: The 'Watcher in the Why...'
5th Nov 2013 3:10pm
Great title! Nice play of words..favorite line "wave washes ashore the banks
of reciprocity, lingering
on foresight"..complicated simplicity here! :)
of reciprocity, lingering
on foresight"..complicated simplicity here! :)
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re: Re: The 'Watcher in the Why...'
5th Nov 2013 3:18pm
Aaaawwww thank you my dear... N as I like to say
there's nothing simple about simplicity! lol
appreciate you so much my sweetness :)
there's nothing simple about simplicity! lol
appreciate you so much my sweetness :)
Re: The 'Watcher in the Why...'
5th Nov 2013 5:47pm
This is one of those writes that provides a punch but then has the reader so eagerly thinking about what is to happen next.
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re: Re: The 'Watcher in the Why...'
5th Nov 2013 6:20pm
You nailed my thoughts bro! lol
I kinda like leaving things open for interpretation
this just happens to be one of those that fit the criteria :) thank u so much bro. Truly appreciate you :)
I kinda like leaving things open for interpretation
this just happens to be one of those that fit the criteria :) thank u so much bro. Truly appreciate you :)
Re: The 'Watcher in the Why...'
5th Nov 2013 9:37pm
This is short with one hell of a punch. Knocked me out my friend. As always good job!
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re: Re: The 'Watcher in the Why...'
5th Nov 2013 11:15pm
Thanks bro. Your compliment was not only wonderful
it is also like an affirmation that I need to keep on doing what I do... N I'm grateful for your support always! :)
it is also like an affirmation that I need to keep on doing what I do... N I'm grateful for your support always! :)
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6th Nov 2013 6:44pm
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