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The Buzz
Flower to flower
two busy bees
one by one
let's go see
pink or white
come with me
ride the wind
there's no fee
unlock my heart,
love is the key.
two busy bees
one by one
let's go see
pink or white
come with me
ride the wind
there's no fee
unlock my heart,
love is the key.
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Re: The Buzz
Anonymous
4th Nov 2013 4:00pm
Concise but complete
A charming poem
Kitty
A charming poem
Kitty
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re: Re: The Buzz
5th Nov 2013 1:32am
Re: The Buzz
4th Nov 2013 6:14pm
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5th Nov 2013 1:33am
Re: The Buzz
4th Nov 2013 9:31pm
Sweet upbeat poem, Hashman!
Like a summer meadow in
its full splendor.
Excellent write!
Like a summer meadow in
its full splendor.
Excellent write!
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5th Nov 2013 1:35am
Re: The Buzz
4th Nov 2013 10:54pm
An image of Daisy's pops into my head here. So sweetly pure and enjoyable.
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5th Nov 2013 1:38am
Re: The Buzz
Anonymous
5th Nov 2013 1:18am
I love the sweetness of so much of what you write. Love IS the key...
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5th Nov 2013 1:40am
Re: The Buzz
5th Nov 2013 1:33am
Sooo delicate....lovely, my Friend!
Reminds me of a blue sky day in June.....in the middle of a field of wild flowers.....love in the air.....
Reminds me of a blue sky day in June.....in the middle of a field of wild flowers.....love in the air.....
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5th Nov 2013 1:42am
Re: The Buzz
Anonymous
5th Nov 2013 2:19am
Enchanting sweet and concise, how perfect can it be..and you buzz so sweetly Mr Hash :)
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5th Nov 2013 9:03am
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5th Nov 2013 6:01am
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5th Nov 2013 9:05am
I do agree with you Gabriella,Love is the key...thank you my friend,happy you like it :)