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i beg
The darkness is closing in
I cannot breath
I have been stripped of my identity
The very core of who i am
Has been washed away
No one cares
I feel as if i am dieing in hell
Help me please
I cannot live like this anymore
I will die
My tears soak my pillow
As i long to do
Whatever i can to end the pain
I have to take my knife
And cut mh skin
The blood now adding
To th tears on my pillow
I beg for Thantos
To come to me
I cannot live in saddness
And horror anymore
Thantos ce to me
Save me from this hell
I have come to know
This is what i beg
I cannot breath
I have been stripped of my identity
The very core of who i am
Has been washed away
No one cares
I feel as if i am dieing in hell
Help me please
I cannot live like this anymore
I will die
My tears soak my pillow
As i long to do
Whatever i can to end the pain
I have to take my knife
And cut mh skin
The blood now adding
To th tears on my pillow
I beg for Thantos
To come to me
I cannot live in saddness
And horror anymore
Thantos ce to me
Save me from this hell
I have come to know
This is what i beg
Published 3rd Nov 2013
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4th Nov 2013 11:26am
I have been stripped of my identity
The very core of who i am
Has been washed away
I feel you on this one.
I like how you added that allusion to Thanatos by the way, that was a nice touch.
And if you meant what you said on this poem, may you receive solace. There are people that care.
Avoid cutting yourself please. :)
The very core of who i am
Has been washed away
I feel you on this one.
I like how you added that allusion to Thanatos by the way, that was a nice touch.
And if you meant what you said on this poem, may you receive solace. There are people that care.
Avoid cutting yourself please. :)
