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Free To Be
Never my intent to create a monster
"but everytime you pass by
wild thoughts escape"
I hang onto common vestiges of decency
but when the pent up energy is so charged
a vibe grabs my restraint
making me want to visit your secluded garage
I can make my way past hundreds of models
wearing the latest fads
but when I see the hemline of your short skirt
my thoughts gravitate to being bad
pull you closer to me
smell the perfume and the air of your breath
a high that is a natural stimulant
providing a very different death
Soft whispers and indecent proposals
from alternative sources hardly do a thing
but one word suggesting your invite
makes every muscle in my body sing
I could seek out one hundred tailors
and none could mask the feeling and surge
should I seek a remedy
the thoughts that I need to purge
If I am putty in your hands
at least let me savior the actions of the play
give me memories for all eternity
and when a final emission
no longer could I delay
Quote taken from "God Part II" (U2)
"but everytime you pass by
wild thoughts escape"
I hang onto common vestiges of decency
but when the pent up energy is so charged
a vibe grabs my restraint
making me want to visit your secluded garage
I can make my way past hundreds of models
wearing the latest fads
but when I see the hemline of your short skirt
my thoughts gravitate to being bad
pull you closer to me
smell the perfume and the air of your breath
a high that is a natural stimulant
providing a very different death
Soft whispers and indecent proposals
from alternative sources hardly do a thing
but one word suggesting your invite
makes every muscle in my body sing
I could seek out one hundred tailors
and none could mask the feeling and surge
should I seek a remedy
the thoughts that I need to purge
If I am putty in your hands
at least let me savior the actions of the play
give me memories for all eternity
and when a final emission
no longer could I delay
Quote taken from "God Part II" (U2)
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Re: Free To Be
Anonymous
3rd Nov 2013 6:24pm
Wonderfully erotic and pleasing....
went nice with DAYLIGHT SAVINGS TIME...lunch???
xo
Kitty
went nice with DAYLIGHT SAVINGS TIME...lunch???
xo
Kitty
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3rd Nov 2013 11:40pm
I am laughing because with everything digitized, I didn't even notice, which is like the first time that has happened!
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3rd Nov 2013 11:41pm
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4th Nov 2013 1:10am
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awesome.. loved it .. I don't know about others but I feel that way a lot of times .. trying to be very descent but that one girl breaks me down.. thank u for sharing ...
keep rolling..
cyanide..
keep rolling..
cyanide..
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3rd Nov 2013 11:44pm
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4th Nov 2013 00:34am
Thanks---we humans are fascinating creatures. When the temperatures are warm we think of getting hotter when someone we are attracted to is near. When it is cold we creatures images of warmth by raise the thermostat and get warmer and still conjure up the same images!
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You're about to be arrested by the poet police, for you murdered this piece. Everyone pay close attention to these lines, for JZM went deep when he said, " I can make my way past hundreds of models wearing the latest fads but when I see the hemline of your short skirt my thoughts gravitate to being bad pull you closer to me smell the perfume and the air of your breath a high that is a natural stimulant providing a very different death." Pure fire!
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4th Nov 2013 2:12pm
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4th Nov 2013 4:21pm
You do paint many delicious and desirable images with your brush, Ted! Soft and sexy ink....
Enjoyed this....Xo
Enjoyed this....Xo
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10th Nov 2013 00:53am
maybe but things really get interesting when I drop my brush. I won't even talk about those moments when the 4 legged beasts get into the paint!