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She Whispers
As the sunset fades
and the brightness
melds into grey,
daylight waves goodbye
colors fall apart
and the nighttime whispers "hello".
Step into me,she says
my heart is pure
my blood flows
feel my life,
embrace my darkness
do not turn from it.
Take a chance
walk through me,
and see
what's on the other side?
and the brightness
melds into grey,
daylight waves goodbye
colors fall apart
and the nighttime whispers "hello".
Step into me,she says
my heart is pure
my blood flows
feel my life,
embrace my darkness
do not turn from it.
Take a chance
walk through me,
and see
what's on the other side?
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Re: She Whispers
3rd Nov 2013 4:10pm
Ooh, very sensual. I really love, "embrace my darkness, do not turn from it." I love that.
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3rd Nov 2013 4:44pm
Sounds like the beginnings of a sweet n passionate love affair bro! I really like the intrigue in this ink :)
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Anonymous
3rd Nov 2013 6:30pm
Good write
Pleasant read
Write on...
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Kitty
Pleasant read
Write on...
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Kitty
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3rd Nov 2013 8:31pm
sounds a bit erotic...or very welcoming I guess... anyways its was a pleasure reading this.. thanks for sharing.
keep scribbling ...
cyanide...
keep scribbling ...
cyanide...
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4th Nov 2013 11:18am
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4th Nov 2013 6:47pm
Embraced by the night
spit out by plain light ...
What's inbetween?
What have you seen?
Enjoyed that, Hashman.
spit out by plain light ...
What's inbetween?
What have you seen?
Enjoyed that, Hashman.
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