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Her Ex
I want my best friends ex.
Its that wrong?
To want what she neglected,
Left broken and foregone?
I want what he gave her.
Can I have his wasted love?
She greedily took all he gave.
Brushed off his affections with a shove.
I want him to caresses me,
The way they use to touch.
I'll remedy his aching heart.
Stand firm and be his crutch.
I know what a man needs.
I know how to treat him.
Touch and kiss and care,
I know how please him.
I promise I'll make all his pains go away,
If only he'd take me next.
Is it wrong to feel this way?
I want my best friends ex.
Its that wrong?
To want what she neglected,
Left broken and foregone?
I want what he gave her.
Can I have his wasted love?
She greedily took all he gave.
Brushed off his affections with a shove.
I want him to caresses me,
The way they use to touch.
I'll remedy his aching heart.
Stand firm and be his crutch.
I know what a man needs.
I know how to treat him.
Touch and kiss and care,
I know how please him.
I promise I'll make all his pains go away,
If only he'd take me next.
Is it wrong to feel this way?
I want my best friends ex.
Published 31st Oct 2013
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31st Oct 2013 3:44am
Wow... Well I ain't gonna pass judgement
But I do wonder how good a friend is she suppose to be lol
But still, if he's got ur attention n you want him... I can only he's lucky as hell lol
But I do wonder how good a friend is she suppose to be lol
But still, if he's got ur attention n you want him... I can only he's lucky as hell lol
31st Oct 2013 4:06am
Lol it's not personal, just a thought that came to mind. I have seen friends drop a good man or woman after neglecting them. Thought it was an interesting point of view
31st Oct 2013 5:18am
Im feeling this alot,alot think it but no one ever really says it ....Great ink!!
31st Oct 2013 5:43am
Thank you, I'm sincerely glad you enjoyed it! There are a lot of things people think to say but won't because it might hurt someone else. And thank you for commenting also
1st Nov 2013 00:44am
Just gotta remember everything that looks and seems good ain't always good for YOU
19th Dec 2013 7:15am
1st Nov 2013 00:37am
Yeah I felt like this before.... of matter of fact I done it and I feel in love with him just to find out he wasn't over her
19th Dec 2013 7:17am
wow...I guess its only perfect in our imaginations but does not work out well when applied to real life
19th Dec 2013 6:58am
17th Feb 2022 6:35am
You portray what may be a common dilemma when desire potentially gets in the way of friendship. Until I read your explanation to poetikmind I was tempted to ask if anything came of it, given it was published near 10 yrs ago.
