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Brazenly
I love the delete button
erasing my drunken truths
hiding them from the world
hoping you didn't read
my whorish thoughts
brazenly put to paper
I want a more delicate touch
to caress your mind with
seduction done best tenderly
not raw and hard
like a porno star on speed
what do I know of writing?
nothing it would seem
knowing only how to spread
my petals on the screen
closing them now
shying away from
the pounding heat
I feel from you
your essence has
seeped into every pore
licked at me wantonly
intended or not
your words affect me greatly
as does your bad boy swagger
and I don't give a fuck attitude
painfully toys with my head
I love it though
it hurts so bad or good
not knowing so i'll close
with i'll be busy living
not playing out my lusts
in fantasy.
erasing my drunken truths
hiding them from the world
hoping you didn't read
my whorish thoughts
brazenly put to paper
I want a more delicate touch
to caress your mind with
seduction done best tenderly
not raw and hard
like a porno star on speed
what do I know of writing?
nothing it would seem
knowing only how to spread
my petals on the screen
closing them now
shying away from
the pounding heat
I feel from you
your essence has
seeped into every pore
licked at me wantonly
intended or not
your words affect me greatly
as does your bad boy swagger
and I don't give a fuck attitude
painfully toys with my head
I love it though
it hurts so bad or good
not knowing so i'll close
with i'll be busy living
not playing out my lusts
in fantasy.
Published 30th Oct 2013
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30th Oct 2013 10:30pm
30th Oct 2013 9:30pm
Well they say the truth comes out when you're drunk... I love your all your writing... Seriously. Love your thoughts in this one! :)
30th Oct 2013 10:31pm
Anonymous
30th Oct 2013 9:56pm
Powerful - taking your mind back... great stuff.
30th Oct 2013 10:31pm
30th Oct 2013 10:57pm
30th Oct 2013 11:10pm
31st Oct 2013 00:32am
thumbs up!!! but don't delete your work...i like it, i think everybody does!!! ;)
31st Oct 2013 6:14am
thank you Cesar for a lovely comment.. yes I get carried away with the delete button at times :) peace Crim
Anonymous
31st Oct 2013 3:46pm
Crim,
Truths may be hidden from the world, but they know where we live ; ) Beautifully written and loved the ending!
tornado
Truths may be hidden from the world, but they know where we live ; ) Beautifully written and loved the ending!
tornado
31st Oct 2013 6:32pm
you made me smile with your clever response yes the truth always comes out and knows our address :) thank you Tornado peace Crim
Anonymous
4th Nov 2013 9:34pm
but dammit Crim! I was just getting warmed up...
A very clever write Miss..you had me at "hiding them from the world"..my nose pressed against the screen..j/k
A very clever write Miss..you had me at "hiding them from the world"..my nose pressed against the screen..j/k
5th Nov 2013 1:53am
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23rd Nov 2013 6:20pm
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