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Empty
I walk alone in shadow
my heart a dark abyss
I call out into the emptiness
and hear my voice ring back
my world a never ending night
from which I can not fight
I am nothing
my heart a dark abyss
I call out into the emptiness
and hear my voice ring back
my world a never ending night
from which I can not fight
I am nothing
Published 21st Jan 2011
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21st Jan 2011 2:05am
'my world a never ending night
from which i can not fight
I am nothing...
oh how powerful those three lines,
even if they were taken away from the poem and used just as they are this would still be a great piece..
i really liked it. jkeep it up
from which i can not fight
I am nothing...
oh how powerful those three lines,
even if they were taken away from the poem and used just as they are this would still be a great piece..
i really liked it. jkeep it up
21st Jan 2011 3:56am
Anonymous
21st Jan 2011 8:23pm
you are something here
21st Jan 2011 8:34pm
24th Sep 2012 1:51am
If you were nothing, then apiece such as this couldnt be written. Nice work.
