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I soar high on black wings of indigenous idiosyncrasy
And dive deep into the precipice of esoteric erudition
Making my way out of the Babylonian wastelands
Finding adventure in the monotonous miasma of daily life
Rebuilding the inoperative voice of the forsaken spirit
Entering a new mindset of judicious perspicacity to find
Everythings meant to be. Just like me... I am free
And dive deep into the precipice of esoteric erudition
Making my way out of the Babylonian wastelands
Finding adventure in the monotonous miasma of daily life
Rebuilding the inoperative voice of the forsaken spirit
Entering a new mindset of judicious perspicacity to find
Everythings meant to be. Just like me... I am free
Published 20th Jan 2011
| Edited 14th Dec 2012
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20th Jan 2011 6:51pm
Everthings meant to be....Great line. I love the spiritual feel of this piece.
I enjoyed the the word play in this piece. it had a great flow but the word play is what made me re read this ... But this line really made me pause..
Rebuilding the inoperative voice of the forsaken spirit ..that had all kinds of thoughts going thru my mind.. but it made me think of finding your way back to self.looking to find a piece or part of you that was hidden away.. either way i really enjoyed this thanks for sahring
Rebuilding the inoperative voice of the forsaken spirit ..that had all kinds of thoughts going thru my mind.. but it made me think of finding your way back to self.looking to find a piece or part of you that was hidden away.. either way i really enjoyed this thanks for sahring
