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the moment when I die (entered in a comp.)
my eyelids will shut
and my eyes will open
my flesh will cease to exist
but my soul would reborn
part of everything...
owner of nothing
i will exist forever.
Published 27th Oct 2013
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Anonymous
27th Oct 2013 9:14am
This is so beautiful. A real insightful soliloquy. Reminds me a little of Plath's style. Short and effective. Very much enjoyed.
27th Oct 2013 2:23pm
27th Oct 2013 7:29pm
this gave me a tranquil thought of death.. very much enjoyed.. good luck in the comp. peace Crim :)
27th Oct 2013 7:53pm
27th Oct 2013 11:49pm
Eyes open indeed-The shortness of the Write-Witty-The Words contained-Powerful!!!
Excellence Cesar!!!
Excellence Cesar!!!
28th Oct 2013 00:06am
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5th Nov 2013 2:41am
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