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The Devil You Know
Some people just aren't made to be sober
I mean me, need the shade
to cover myself from a world too bright
I kicked methadone and heroin's ass
but when they left
they left a hole
my anxiety too strong
lose my footing with reality
can't be part of mainstream society
so I fill it with alcohol
need to drink
just to feel human
to give me a state of peace
better than screaming
at the sky
liquor erases the steps
shadowing me
strokes my ego
closes the doors to the ugly rooms
better the devil you know
than bumping into walls in the mental ward
I mean me, need the shade
to cover myself from a world too bright
I kicked methadone and heroin's ass
but when they left
they left a hole
my anxiety too strong
lose my footing with reality
can't be part of mainstream society
so I fill it with alcohol
need to drink
just to feel human
to give me a state of peace
better than screaming
at the sky
liquor erases the steps
shadowing me
strokes my ego
closes the doors to the ugly rooms
better the devil you know
than bumping into walls in the mental ward
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25th Oct 2013 11:20pm
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26th Oct 2013 8:40am
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26th Oct 2013 8:41am
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26th Oct 2013 1:25am
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26th Oct 2013 1:45am
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26th Oct 2013 8:42am
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26th Oct 2013 3:04am
too bright, too bright. isn't it though? emotion and numbness combined. thanks. I enjoyed reading this.
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26th Oct 2013 8:44am
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26th Oct 2013 6:22am
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26th Oct 2013 7:29am
"I mean me, need the shade
to cover myself from a world too bright"
I loved these lines. Very well done.
to cover myself from a world too bright"
I loved these lines. Very well done.
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26th Oct 2013 8:45am
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Anonymous
27th Oct 2013 1:31am
I can understand this all too well...
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27th Oct 2013 6:16pm
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27th Oct 2013 4:26am
no amount of physical contact,drug,or advise could match the healing powers of a well made cocktail...
to alcohol !! well written lines
to alcohol !! well written lines
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28th Oct 2013 6:47pm
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Anonymous
27th Oct 2013 4:50am
It's all about surviving and we all survive different ways, Brenda, it's very relatable in every level.
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27th Oct 2013 6:17pm
i'm going to try surviving without the alcohol Vee let's see how it goes :) thank you for the read and comment.. peace Brenda
Re: The Devil You Know
27th Oct 2013 5:11am
"closes the doors to the ugly rooms
better the devil you know
than bumping into walls in the mental ward"
^^Wow!^^ :)
The way in which your truth flows on paper has so much power, Brenda! Love it! Xo
better the devil you know
than bumping into walls in the mental ward"
^^Wow!^^ :)
The way in which your truth flows on paper has so much power, Brenda! Love it! Xo
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27th Oct 2013 6:20pm
I have to confess closes the doors to the ugly rooms was Hemi's edit.. of my original poem the rest of that stanza was mine.. I didn't save the first draft I did and rewrote the best I could but still used some of Hemi's lines.. thank you Rain.. peace Brenda
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Anonymous
27th Oct 2013 2:21pm
I feel this one, Brenda
powerful piece...I have danced with the mental hosp walls and know that devil too
I try to avoid drinking (failed miserably last night and feel like pure crap typing this)-but, without cannabis-just kill me
me and the mainstream world is a deadly cocktail
the devil you know and the one you don't
sometimes, it's more an obligation and lack of choice than a decision.
great write, peace n love
miki
powerful piece...I have danced with the mental hosp walls and know that devil too
I try to avoid drinking (failed miserably last night and feel like pure crap typing this)-but, without cannabis-just kill me
me and the mainstream world is a deadly cocktail
the devil you know and the one you don't
sometimes, it's more an obligation and lack of choice than a decision.
great write, peace n love
miki
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27th Oct 2013 6:22pm
I'm sorry Miki that you have been in mental hospitals as well.. also sorry lovely lady that you were feeling so bad as to need to drink hugs.. thank you for such an honest thoughtful comment.. wishing you peace Brenda
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The devils I know.One on each shoulder. Bastards like me or something. They are fun to dance with sometimes.There's always a cost though ><
Enjoyed...
Enjoyed...
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28th Oct 2013 11:58pm
I get you Fenom :) they are fun.. thank you for the read and comment.. peace Brenda