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WHILE CHANNELING SWEENEY TODD
Aaahhhh...I see that you noticed--my dear--
Does my new blade illicit some fear?
While you dream of your death,
With your last gurgled breath,
As i slit you...from ear to ear!!! [/font]
(Entered in the 'Ire of the Irish' competition)
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Re: WHILE CHANNELING SWEENEY TODD
24th Oct 2013 5:35pm
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24th Oct 2013 6:52pm
Thank you my Friend....ummm....humbled, indeed, by your generous praise! Sincerely appreciated ! x
One of my very favorite legends....Sweeney Todd, and 'Jack the Ripper', of course. :O
One of my very favorite legends....Sweeney Todd, and 'Jack the Ripper', of course. :O
Re: WHILE CHANNELING SWEENEY TODD
24th Oct 2013 5:57pm
...always thrilled to read your ink! I love your mind, Enchantress!
Pens Up~
Pens Up~
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re: Re: WHILE CHANNELING SWEENEY TODD
24th Oct 2013 6:58pm
Rain, you honor me with your compliments!I thank you soo much! Most appreciated--to be certain! xO
(A bit demented, and deranged...my mind. But, glad that you appreciate my moments of 'm a d n e s s'...
Buahahahahahaha!!!)
(A bit demented, and deranged...my mind. But, glad that you appreciate my moments of 'm a d n e s s'...
Buahahahahahaha!!!)
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25th Oct 2013 5:20am
Re: WHILE CHANNELING SWEENEY TODD
25th Oct 2013 00:25am
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LOL! Happy you clarified you comment!
Welll---in the 'spirit' of the haunting season....
Thanks for your reaction, my Friend! x
(Pleased that my piece achieved its intended purpose!) :)
Welll---in the 'spirit' of the haunting season....
Thanks for your reaction, my Friend! x
(Pleased that my piece achieved its intended purpose!) :)
Re: WHILE CHANNELING SWEENEY TODD
25th Oct 2013 1:11am
Felt a cold wind on the back of my neck...and that picture gives me the quivers :)
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re: Re: WHILE CHANNELING SWEENEY TODD
25th Oct 2013 2:40am
Best to be on one's guard, when dealing with the sensation of cold on one's neck--glancing over the shoulder...not a bad idea! ;)
Thank you, Hashman, for your visit and your thoughts. Both are appreciated--indeed!
Thank you, Hashman, for your visit and your thoughts. Both are appreciated--indeed!
Re: WHILE CHANNELING SWEENEY TODD
25th Oct 2013 4:16am
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25th Oct 2013 4:45am
Thank you so much, Sasperala, for your generous words of praise, and for your reading-list add--all are so appreciated!
It is glad that i am--indeed--to welcome a new visitor to my realm! I am pleased that you enjoyed this piece.
Sioch`ain leat, mo Cara nua!
Enchantress
It is glad that i am--indeed--to welcome a new visitor to my realm! I am pleased that you enjoyed this piece.
Sioch`ain leat, mo Cara nua!
Enchantress
Re: WHILE CHANNELING SWEENEY TODD
Wow sweets that was awesome plus!!
I've missed your words!
Great read and write!!!
All the luck in the comp sweets
Sir Lancelott
I've missed your words!
Great read and write!!!
All the luck in the comp sweets
Sir Lancelott
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re: Re: WHILE CHANNELING SWEENEY TODD
27th Oct 2013 3:02pm
AWWwwww...My thanks to thee, Sir Knight!
'Tis honored, that i am, that thou hath left me such generous words of praise! Thy kindness is most appreciated.
I thank thee, also for wishing me well in the competition!
Thy return to my realm..'tis a pleasure, to be certain!
'Tis honored, that i am, that thou hath left me such generous words of praise! Thy kindness is most appreciated.
I thank thee, also for wishing me well in the competition!
Thy return to my realm..'tis a pleasure, to be certain!
Re: WHILE CHANNELING SWEENEY TODD
27th Oct 2013 2:41pm
I can hear her drown like a thirsty drain... beautiful murderous rite, an ode to the slain.
I love when you spill it. It's worth the wait. :)
I love when you spill it. It's worth the wait. :)
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re: Re: WHILE CHANNELING SWEENEY TODD
27th Oct 2013 3:20pm
Case, that is just so spot on...."drown like a thirsty drain"---so vivid!
(gurgle [gulp]...gurgle...glubb...glubbb.....) (LOL!)
Thank you for your generous comments, my friend!
They are truly appreciated!
(gurgle [gulp]...gurgle...glubb...glubbb.....) (LOL!)
Thank you for your generous comments, my friend!
They are truly appreciated!
Re: WHILE CHANNELING SWEENEY TODD
27th Oct 2013 4:18pm
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27th Oct 2013 9:35pm
Thank you so much for your thoughtful comments.....and for your good-luck support! I trust that you know how much they are appreciated,my friend!
Re: WHILE CHANNELING SWEENEY TODD
1st Nov 2013 1:52pm
I s e e k the depths of darkness for protection...waiting...l u r k i n g in the shadows' solace...watching, A L W A Y S W A T C H I N G ........
a silent, imperceptible presence...dt was d most interesting part to begin with ur supernatural word of poetry which actually transform d reality to its best…to understand..
a silent, imperceptible presence...dt was d most interesting part to begin with ur supernatural word of poetry which actually transform d reality to its best…to understand..
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Ummmmm..........Huh???
(not really pertaining to this piece)
HoHummmmmm.....Whatever
(Thanks???
(not really pertaining to this piece)
HoHummmmmm.....Whatever
(Thanks???
Re: WHILE CHANNELING SWEENEY TODD
22nd Jul 2014 8:58am
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Thanks, so much, BeautifulManiac, for taking the time to read, and to leave your thoughts beneath my piece !! Both are truly appreciated!
I am glad that you enjoyed the 'sinister' aspects of this little Limerick.
It is always a pleasure whenever a new visitor journeys into my realm. Please know that you are welcome,mo Chara nua-- anytime!
I am glad that you enjoyed the 'sinister' aspects of this little Limerick.
It is always a pleasure whenever a new visitor journeys into my realm. Please know that you are welcome,mo Chara nua-- anytime!
Re. WHILE CHANNELING SWEENEY TODD
21st Dec 2015 2:43pm
Re. WHILE CHANNELING SWEENEY TODD
27th Sep 2017 00:36am
perfectly scary - this was a wee firecracker of a poem - loved it :-)
loads of warm Hugs :-)
loads of warm Hugs :-)
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Re: Re. WHILE CHANNELING SWEENEY TODD
27th Sep 2017 1:18pm
David, thanks ever so much! i am glad that you enjoyed this one, my friend...and that it left you with just the perfect amount of "fear"! (lol) I truly appreciate the time you are taking to read, and comment on my past postings! Your thoughtful, generous words are truly encouraging, and mean more to me than you may realize. Soooo many warm hugs headed right back to You, as well!!
Re. WHILE CHANNELING SWEENEY TODD
Anonymous
7th Oct 2017 5:12pm
Good lord! this scared me in a sexy way lmao!
ive missed your presence, so had to go old
school on you ;)
ive missed your presence, so had to go old
school on you ;)
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Re: Re. WHILE CHANNELING SWEENEY TODD
7th Oct 2017 5:45pm
Hee! Hee! Never thought of this with quite that connotation! However, i have often wondered what deviant sexual fantasies / aspects of arousal were racing through the barber's mind...that drove him into madness and murderous frenzy! My friend, it means ever so much to me, that you took the time to read a past posting! And your comments have lifted my spirit and left me in smiles! Thank you for your inspiring words!!!
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Anonymous
7th Oct 2017 5:55pm
yeesss, now i need some more, my pleasure sweetie :)
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