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Haiku VI
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Onyx night looming
The shadows' breaths shriek madness
Escape now vanished
( . . . .And from ALL those other "ghoulies, an ghosties, and long-leggedy beasties, and things that go bump in the night...." *
wellll....they will find you.... trust me! Bwahahahahahaha!!!)
* (~~ From an old Scotish(Celtic?) prayer of obscure origin)
Onyx night looming
The shadows' breaths shriek madness
Escape now vanished
( . . . .And from ALL those other "ghoulies, an ghosties, and long-leggedy beasties, and things that go bump in the night...." *
wellll....they will find you.... trust me! Bwahahahahahaha!!!)
* (~~ From an old Scotish(Celtic?) prayer of obscure origin)
Published 9th Oct 2013
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9th Oct 2013 6:03pm
9th Oct 2013 11:15pm
LOL ! Why thank you!
(I have been known, to bite--on occasion--myself! Always pleasant to find 'new blood', among my reviewers....welcome to my realm!
I appreciate your visit!
Sioch`ain leat, mo Cara nua!
(I have been known, to bite--on occasion--myself! Always pleasant to find 'new blood', among my reviewers....welcome to my realm!
I appreciate your visit!
Sioch`ain leat, mo Cara nua!
9th Oct 2013 6:09pm
9th Oct 2013 11:20pm
Ummm....welll....er-ummm, just as long as the shadow's breath isn't felt upon the back of one's own neck...in the dark....
Thank you, my friend. I truly appreciate your comments, and your faithful following! :)
Thank you, my friend. I truly appreciate your comments, and your faithful following! :)
9th Oct 2013 6:11pm
Haiku of horror! Chilling, thrilling...
No escape everrrrrrr...
Haiku's still wonderful.
No escape everrrrrrr...
Haiku's still wonderful.
9th Oct 2013 11:25pm
O..you can run, but you can't hide! :) (GOL!)
Thank you, Atakti, for your loyalty, and for your kind words of praise! All are most appreciated--to be certain! :)
Thank you, Atakti, for your loyalty, and for your kind words of praise! All are most appreciated--to be certain! :)
9th Oct 2013 6:42pm
9th Oct 2013 11:31pm
Awww...Rain, my dear Friend, your generous praise, and encouragement, have brought smile, after smile...xo
Thank you, so very much! I appreciate your faithful following, and your comments...so appreciated!
Thank you, so very much! I appreciate your faithful following, and your comments...so appreciated!
9th Oct 2013 11:21pm
9th Oct 2013 11:40pm
...Followed by the shadow people...or, by the 'darkness' of my words (presence) ??? ;) (gol!)
I am pleased that my poem left its intended effect!
Thank you for your visit to my realm,your loyalty,and your 'fear'.......
I am pleased that my poem left its intended effect!
Thank you for your visit to my realm,your loyalty,and your 'fear'.......
11th Oct 2013 10:07pm
11th Oct 2013 10:14pm
O, me too....!!
Thank you for reading, and leaving your gracious praise beneath my piece! I truly appreciate your faithful following, my Friend :)
Thank you for reading, and leaving your gracious praise beneath my piece! I truly appreciate your faithful following, my Friend :)
12th Oct 2013 00:20am
12th Oct 2013 4:31am
. . . Especially when you're all a l o n e... in deepest midnite...its origin, unknown!
Thank you, ever so much, for taking the time to read, and comment, on my piece---most appreciated!
Always glad to have a new reviewer. Welcome to the dark-side of my realm!
Sioch`ain leat, mo cara, nua
Thank you, ever so much, for taking the time to read, and comment, on my piece---most appreciated!
Always glad to have a new reviewer. Welcome to the dark-side of my realm!
Sioch`ain leat, mo cara, nua
12th Oct 2013 4:33am
12th Oct 2013 4:56am
E x a c t l y.....wise words, indeed! :)
Thank you, Crimsin, for taking the time to read, and comment, on my Haiku! Both are sincerely appreciated, and accepted, with humble gratitude!
It is always a pleasure, to have a new reviewer...welcome to my realm!
Sioch`ain leat, Cara nua!
Thank you, Crimsin, for taking the time to read, and comment, on my Haiku! Both are sincerely appreciated, and accepted, with humble gratitude!
It is always a pleasure, to have a new reviewer...welcome to my realm!
Sioch`ain leat, Cara nua!
15th Jan 2014 1:18am
The hair is standing up on the back of my neck... So descriptive the dark you've painted. Love it.
15th Jan 2014 1:37am
Thank you --ever so much--for reading, and leaving your thoughts beneath my Haiku! Both are sincerely appreciated--indeed!
My Friend, I am pleased that you were able to 'feel' the terror...lurking within this piece!
Always a pleasure to welcome a new visitor to my realm! Please--feel free to journey into it's darkness....anytime....
My Friend, I am pleased that you were able to 'feel' the terror...lurking within this piece!
Always a pleasure to welcome a new visitor to my realm! Please--feel free to journey into it's darkness....anytime....
This is so cool.
How interesting a prayer and origin.
And what a creepy image to enhance the tone of it.
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How interesting a prayer and origin.
And what a creepy image to enhance the tone of it.
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