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I Won't Be Alone
My heart is tearing apart at the seams, feels like it will destroy me.
Never knew how many tears I
had till the day you chose
to kill me. Body still
living soul is dead.
Leave me in the graveyard with all my friends. You killed the innocent part of me.
But know when you come
stumbling my heart in
your hand I will be
where you left me.
I won't be alone. My broken dreams will be around me and the feeling of hopelessness has left me.
Never knew how many tears I
had till the day you chose
to kill me. Body still
living soul is dead.
Leave me in the graveyard with all my friends. You killed the innocent part of me.
But know when you come
stumbling my heart in
your hand I will be
where you left me.
I won't be alone. My broken dreams will be around me and the feeling of hopelessness has left me.
Published 19th Jan 2011
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19th Jan 2011 7:46am
behind these lines lay alot of pain and i can tell you that you portray the pain well and create some quite vivid imagery.
i like the way you kept it short too.. i think that if it would of been much longer it wouldnt of seemed as honest as it did.
you did well dear. keep it up
i like the way you kept it short too.. i think that if it would of been much longer it wouldnt of seemed as honest as it did.
you did well dear. keep it up
