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Light for Venus
Today opalescence opened eyes
crying life
within gasp
air of sea breeze grasp
tips
toes
blades of grass
Where thunder on the mountain
means wind in December
my Precious calendula prize
magic of the drifting mist
sailing mats
across beyond
blazing suns
Eyes upon leaves
fall
breath kept
for rainbow
there
where stars cross skies
skating the prism
lay
lush 'pon lilac way
candles kiss burns
the Princess wish
As a day is
life begins anew
Thee Beloved
Borne of sacred Ash
http://www.edhelper.com/poetry/Octobers_Party_by_George_Cooper.htm
crying life
within gasp
air of sea breeze grasp
tips
toes
blades of grass
Where thunder on the mountain
means wind in December
my Precious calendula prize
magic of the drifting mist
sailing mats
across beyond
blazing suns
Eyes upon leaves
fall
breath kept
for rainbow
there
where stars cross skies
skating the prism
lay
lush 'pon lilac way
candles kiss burns
the Princess wish
As a day is
life begins anew
Thee Beloved
Borne of sacred Ash
http://www.edhelper.com/poetry/Octobers_Party_by_George_Cooper.htm
Published 21st Oct 2013
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21st Oct 2013 11:54pm
22nd Oct 2013 1:48am
22nd Oct 2013 00:07am
hey there,
hope all is well in the states?
As I was reading this sublime work it took me away to `Aladdin`s` flying mat soaring to great heights. Nice one.
KG
hope all is well in the states?
As I was reading this sublime work it took me away to `Aladdin`s` flying mat soaring to great heights. Nice one.
KG
22nd Oct 2013 1:49am
22nd Oct 2013 00:38am
Beautiful poem, thank you for sharing...enjoyed, Soul. Wishing on the candle blown.
22nd Oct 2013 00:49am
22nd Oct 2013 3:59am
Anonymous
22nd Oct 2013 1:41am
Beautifully ethereal poem, love. Much enjoyed the referenced poem as well.
22nd Oct 2013 1:51am
Thank You Dear Petit:)
That's a whimsical little Write he did there eh?
That's a whimsical little Write he did there eh?
Anonymous
22nd Oct 2013 1:57am
Very sweet. Yours felt more like 'Moondance" to me, though.
22nd Oct 2013 2:42am
22nd Oct 2013 3:59am
A most magnificently stunning read sweet Soul! A beautiful glowing light! Xo
Pen love~
Pen love~
22nd Oct 2013 2:11pm
Anonymous
- Edited 22nd Oct 2013 5:05pm
22nd Oct 2013 5:04pm
Now that is what I would call a "Venusian sky"!!!
The beauty of the land, earth a treasure box!
A piece between two worlds, Soul, great wording.
The beauty of the land, earth a treasure box!
A piece between two worlds, Soul, great wording.
22nd Oct 2013 6:36pm
23rd Oct 2013 11:18pm
24th Oct 2013 3:00am
Awwww You are so very kind Dear Red-Happy to see You here!!!
Thank You so very much!!!
Thank You so very much!!!
24th Oct 2013 9:03am
24th Oct 2013 2:11pm
Anonymous
26th Oct 2013 8:50pm
This is outstanding. Your rhythm and words are ruled by a love goddess. <3
27th Oct 2013 2:09am
27th Oct 2013 5:07am
27th Oct 2013 10:13pm
Thanks for stopping by again Cesar-I greatly appreciate Your kindness!!!
27th Oct 2013 9:12pm
Bro. Soul I'm happy to know that your Great ink is still rolling!!!
Brilliant piece!!
Sir Lancelott
Brilliant piece!!
Sir Lancelott
27th Oct 2013 10:14pm
My Bro. from another Mother-You have been very missed Sir-Appreciate You stopping by Lance!!!
27th Oct 2013 10:16pm
28th Oct 2013 10:39pm
28th Oct 2013 10:51pm
6th Nov 2013 6:31am
wow what a write! enjoyed totally..I wonder did u draw inspiration from the pic there or it came naturally?
keep writing soul..
cyanide..
keep writing soul..
cyanide..
6th Nov 2013 2:11pm
Humbled CK-Thank You!!!
no this was natural Muse...i tend to look for pics that fit after i Write something...once in a blue moon a pic will inspire a Write...but its rare -Thank You again-Pen on!!!
no this was natural Muse...i tend to look for pics that fit after i Write something...once in a blue moon a pic will inspire a Write...but its rare -Thank You again-Pen on!!!
10th Nov 2013 1:19pm
10th Nov 2013 1:25pm
You are very kind- I thank You for such humbling praise-...many fine Writers here...hope to catch You soon!!!
11th Nov 2013 10:56am
11th Nov 2013 2:15pm
