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u turn me on..........
the moment that I see
your face......
those beautiful brown eyes
complimented by a smile that
lights up the world
coy, sweet, sly and seductive
all at once
…....u turn me on
your voice, soft and low
the way that you say “I love you....”
sexy yet so sincere
the way you gently
whisper in my ear
sensuality
my baby's breath......
….....u turn me on
your body....
...it makes me tingle
“all over my body baby”
am I'm so “fortunate” that you're mine
(…..and I don't care how recycled the line)
from the crown of your head
to the apex of that fine, round behind
the softness of your breast
those voluptuous thighs .....
...a love supreme, my queen
legs straight out of my late night “fingertip dreams”
elegantly adorned
or naked to the world........(mmm it's getting warm)
…....u turn me on
"I know you, I live you"
no one else knows
the things you do
like I do.......
Lesser men might perish
from the way
you love my body down
as for me,
you're my heart beating
my passion,
my burning flame
my tempest swirling
'round and round
you're the reason I'm
always
so
so
satisfied
…......u turn me on
but most important of all,
it's those things
spoken between
your heart to mine....
big or small
soul to soul
our spirits twain
I awaken every night
in a cold sweat
screaming your name.....
“no one in the world”
loves me like you do.
our personal secret.......
shared only between me and you
you're my lifetime
you're my reason
and it's my season..........sexy baby
…......to turn *u* on ; )
Published 21st Oct 2013
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21st Oct 2013 4:08pm
U r in rare form lately writing such sweet sexy and hot verses to your beloved. The extraordinary connection between u two is palpable to the reader.........
21st Oct 2013 4:23pm
Loving, longing and lusting ........my "one and only" She stimulates my fantasy (or twisted reality) depending on the moment. Every moment is sublime......I digress : )
Thank you Scarlet
Thank you Scarlet
Anonymous
21st Oct 2013 5:50pm
Yes yes yes turned me on.
21st Oct 2013 7:32pm
21st Oct 2013 8:09pm
How could a woman not fall for this beautiful ink?! Entire piece is stunning but those last three lines,....hooked! Definitely your season Xoxo
*your actions and words turn me on*
*your actions and words turn me on*
21st Oct 2013 8:16pm
Why thank you Ms. Rain Glad I've found that magic switch that lights your fire : )
......reminded of a lyric:
"....You've been on my mind, I grow fonder every day
Lose myself in time just thinking of your face.......
........I dare you to let me be your, your one and only
Promise I'm worthy to hold in your arms
So come on and give me a chance...."
Something like that : )
......reminded of a lyric:
"....You've been on my mind, I grow fonder every day
Lose myself in time just thinking of your face.......
........I dare you to let me be your, your one and only
Promise I'm worthy to hold in your arms
So come on and give me a chance...."
Something like that : )
21st Oct 2013 8:21pm
Anonymous
21st Oct 2013 9:22pm
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22nd Oct 2013 6:25am
Anonymous
21st Oct 2013 9:23pm
Mrm,
Captured perfectly what it is to live within that moment...that realm....of being turned on!
Loved your line:
"from the crown of your head
to the apex of that fine, round behind"
Yes, Yes, Yes, air it out for all to see! Enjoy the season my brother! ; )
tornado
Captured perfectly what it is to live within that moment...that realm....of being turned on!
Loved your line:
"from the crown of your head
to the apex of that fine, round behind"
Yes, Yes, Yes, air it out for all to see! Enjoy the season my brother! ; )
tornado
22nd Oct 2013 6:26am
21st Oct 2013 10:16pm
22nd Oct 2013 6:27am
21st Oct 2013 10:45pm
The total picture of romantic loving is here. At the start I was feeling something like James Taylor's "Whenever I See Your Smiling Face". Then you mentioned the voice and the body. Can never go wrong with a little John Coltrane and Anita Baker added to the mix.
Favorite part: "am I'm so “fortunate” that you're mine
(…..and I don't care how recycled the line) "
Favorite part: "am I'm so “fortunate” that you're mine
(…..and I don't care how recycled the line) "
22nd Oct 2013 6:28am
24th Oct 2013 00:39am
just hate to see such a creative force hampered by some notion of what is overused!
