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Bessie
She told me Her name was Bess:
I caught Her first
in corners of my eye
with quick flash down the steps
to a star
like balls of light
till finally caught
resting
In Her wedding dress
It was then She spoke Her name
part of the country
happy in my home
She was waiting for Her Love
carried off
to civil war
with his picture in hand
she cries and moans
only thing of value
held close
upon rocking chair
tin-type and threadbare
when dripped my eyes
She shared Her way
to a world gone cold
In a harsh heart of winter
came news
this of mortal wounds
and donned Her treasured dress
lying in crumpled mess
She and Her tears
froze within corner
holding onto loss
in sound of breaking evening
No will to start the fire
No hope which to guide Her
Only paths to Her Beloved
Some way She remained
never finding the way
till slowly She glowed
playing tricks
in place of misery
hiding keys and things
placing them in odd sort
on middle of tables
the smile You'd feel laughter to hear
Sometimes She'd warn
sing to the Sun
carry on carry on
Eventually
calm came to peace
where She knew
time was to leave this place
and She said goodbye
on lips of a dream
where She stood to a path
praised by sunlight
leaving my home empty
Entered in a comp*
I caught Her first
in corners of my eye
with quick flash down the steps
to a star
like balls of light
till finally caught
resting
In Her wedding dress
It was then She spoke Her name
part of the country
happy in my home
She was waiting for Her Love
carried off
to civil war
with his picture in hand
she cries and moans
only thing of value
held close
upon rocking chair
tin-type and threadbare
when dripped my eyes
She shared Her way
to a world gone cold
In a harsh heart of winter
came news
this of mortal wounds
and donned Her treasured dress
lying in crumpled mess
She and Her tears
froze within corner
holding onto loss
in sound of breaking evening
No will to start the fire
No hope which to guide Her
Only paths to Her Beloved
Some way She remained
never finding the way
till slowly She glowed
playing tricks
in place of misery
hiding keys and things
placing them in odd sort
on middle of tables
the smile You'd feel laughter to hear
Sometimes She'd warn
sing to the Sun
carry on carry on
Eventually
calm came to peace
where She knew
time was to leave this place
and She said goodbye
on lips of a dream
where She stood to a path
praised by sunlight
leaving my home empty
Entered in a comp*
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Re: Bessie
21st Oct 2013 00:20am
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21st Oct 2013 00:29am
Indeed Dear Grace:)
I am comforted knowing She left smiling instead of crying:)
I am comforted knowing She left smiling instead of crying:)
Re: Bessie
Anonymous
21st Oct 2013 1:12am
Beautiful dreaming write. Maybe you helped her find her way...

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re: Re: Bessie
21st Oct 2013 1:13am
That is my hopes Dear Petit...She was part of my life and home for the bulk of it...Thank You for reading:)
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21st Oct 2013 3:01am
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21st Oct 2013 2:10pm
Re: Bessie
21st Oct 2013 10:14am
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21st Oct 2013 2:11pm
Thank You Dear Magdalena-Bet You've plenty of these tales across the 'ol pond!!!
Re: Bessie
21st Oct 2013 12:31pm
Wow this piece is very moving and chock full of emotions, nicely done. Good luck in the comp.:-)
Red
Red
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re: Re: Bessie
21st Oct 2013 2:12pm
Thank You Dear Red...i came to love Her very much through the years :)
Re: Bessie
21st Oct 2013 5:56pm
this is such a calm touching read..like the still-succulent yellow leaves falling towards the ground without any crinkly sounds..accompanied along a spiralling route of the tender flowing breeze..with the pleasant aroma of love! Just touches me in all corners of my reading heart, Soul!! I love your lang style..which I feel a bit of different from all others I had read in DU..in the way a sort of Old English way,if I am not wrong, & the formatting with Capitals spread across in emphasis in between the lines! Would treasure this lovely piece in my lists & all the v.best in the comp!. Uma:)
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re: Re: Bessie
21st Oct 2013 6:39pm
You Bless me with Your kind Words Uma-Thank You so very much:)
Indeed it is what i have read most...yes i must say...my Caps are always purposed ;)
Thank You for catching the little touches they mean more to me!!!
Indeed it is what i have read most...yes i must say...my Caps are always purposed ;)
Thank You for catching the little touches they mean more to me!!!
Re: Bessie
21st Oct 2013 7:08pm
Dear Soul i'm sure she took with her peace planted by your tender words.. such a beautiful, poignant story.. peace Brenda
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re: Re: Bessie
21st Oct 2013 9:07pm
:) My Hopes Brenda...She became quite playful...wherein the first years She carried sorrow...Thank You so Much Dear!!!
Re: Bessie
21st Oct 2013 10:08pm
Aww...I feel like I know Bessie by the way you scribed her in beautiful detail! This was another grand spill, my Soul! Thank you for sharing such a warm-hearted read! Xo
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re: Re: Bessie
21st Oct 2013 11:19pm
Thank You Dear Rain :)
She was magic-child-like-mischievous, waiting to laugh-took years to get to that.
She was magic-child-like-mischievous, waiting to laugh-took years to get to that.
Re: Bessie
21st Oct 2013 10:53pm
I have a good idea of the age bracket you are in but man, this has quality which is timeless. Very much reminds me of the stories Carl Sandburg came across as he was writing about Lincoln.
A real treasure you have here.
A real treasure you have here.
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re: Re: Bessie
21st Oct 2013 11:31pm
Deeply humbled Jazz-I thank You!!!
Bronze Sir...on the cusp of silver ;)
I had read of him and rootabaga but this head doesn't hold much without repetitious readings...will have to download or search out his stuff soon-Thank You:)
Bronze Sir...on the cusp of silver ;)
I had read of him and rootabaga but this head doesn't hold much without repetitious readings...will have to download or search out his stuff soon-Thank You:)
Re: Bessie
22nd Oct 2013 00:27am
Soul, there is nowt more hurtful to the heart, especially when one says goodbye to the one you love.
Well written.
KG
Well written.
KG
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Re: Bessie
25th Oct 2013 00:20am
oh how I love your lyrical movements Soul....
You are so talented !
Great write!
XOXO
Fire
You are so talented !
Great write!
XOXO
Fire
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re: Re: Bessie
25th Oct 2013 00:50am
Thank You for saying such a sweet thing Dear Fire-this Entity was a part of my home and life for so long...and now it has been years without her...odd how She became family, yet only with the power of Her spirit...occasional glimpses, tricks, and a couple dreams-souls are strong and leave imprints upon the world despite the world beating upon them.
Thank You Always!!!
Thank You Always!!!
Re: Bessie
11th Dec 2013 2:44pm
Nice ghost story Soul...good thing you encountered a good spirit, otherwise things could get messy! Awesome write my friend...best of luck in the comp.
/EngrVV
/EngrVV
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