deepundergroundpoetry.com
The Night Of Death
The Lies
The Cries
All The Pain
In Their Eyes
And What Do We Call This Special Time?
The Night Of Death
I Never Sleep
l Rarely Dream
This Is A Good Thing
It May Seem
But Tonight
All Things Will Die
Only Because Of My Shut Eyes
And Tomorrow Night
When The People Are Gone
I Will Be The Only One
Sad And Lonely
As I Once Was
The Cries
All The Pain
In Their Eyes
And What Do We Call This Special Time?
The Night Of Death
I Never Sleep
l Rarely Dream
This Is A Good Thing
It May Seem
But Tonight
All Things Will Die
Only Because Of My Shut Eyes
And Tomorrow Night
When The People Are Gone
I Will Be The Only One
Sad And Lonely
As I Once Was
Published 18th Jan 2011
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 1
reading list entries 0
comments 6
reads 819
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
Anonymous
18th Jan 2011 7:03am
I really like this. So much emotion in so few lines.. It's kind of comforting - going back to your original, truer form, despite the darkness in the poem.. Ahah.. I have no idea what I'm talking about.. but I still like it (:
18th Jan 2011 5:16pm
Thankyou so very much! It was one of the one's I wrote as a child. I just kept it and liked it. I wrote this in sixth grade.
31st Jan 2011 8:42pm
Hi there,
I was reading this through and have to say it makes a fantastic poem. But this has been posted as lyrics. In its current structure (a poem) it doesn't cross over easily into song.
There doesn't appear to be any structure for verses, bridges or choruses etc.
kind regards,
Hooded
I was reading this through and have to say it makes a fantastic poem. But this has been posted as lyrics. In its current structure (a poem) it doesn't cross over easily into song.
There doesn't appear to be any structure for verses, bridges or choruses etc.
kind regards,
Hooded
12th Mar 2011 11:09pm
for some reason.. I find myself enjoying your poetry... and thts inspiring me.... I truly hope u continue to write more...
13th Mar 2011 4:06pm
Thank you! I will continue to wrie more. And maybe even longer ones. I post mine by my emotions that day. And ive been happy. And i didnt want to post any of my newer ones. But i will.
13th Mar 2011 4:06pm
Thank you! I will continue to wrie more. And maybe even longer ones. I post mine by my emotions that day. And ive been happy. And i didnt want to post any of my newer ones. But i will.
