All I Need..

this reads like a song chorus. [:

personally, i think you could lose the ellipses because the line break itself implies a slight pause as well as the first words of the next lines.

i like that you're just asking for a little hope, nothing much, just so you can see hope somewhere even if it's not necessarily yours. keep it up! [:

thank you :)

it reminds me of my poem called all i need but we have different needs your's a window mine's my Dearest..
i think it 's your best one Dalton  (so far)

perfect

Thanks. Reading it reminded me of the Count of Monte Cristo and how Edmond Dantès did not appreciate his cell's window while Abbé Faria longed to see the sunlight.

good read! save the dots! it's so short that they are overwhelming. less is more!