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Given Up
It’s escaped my sin,
It pries out within,
I drown in sorrow,
A cut to the morrow.
I’m a person who cries,
A person who sighs,
If you cut me, I bleed,
If you starve me, I need.
I have a brain,
I’m not insane,
I am an illness,
A plague.
On my last leg I stumble, fall,
Now I’m at a crawl,
Now in rain,
Now in pain.
I hold my breath,
And wait for death,
Do you understand?
How will I land?
On firm foundation!
I yell across the nation!
My savior, my life,
You saved me from my strife,
But everything can be changed from just one night.
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It pries out within,
I drown in sorrow,
A cut to the morrow.
I’m a person who cries,
A person who sighs,
If you cut me, I bleed,
If you starve me, I need.
I have a brain,
I’m not insane,
I am an illness,
A plague.
On my last leg I stumble, fall,
Now I’m at a crawl,
Now in rain,
Now in pain.
I hold my breath,
And wait for death,
Do you understand?
How will I land?
On firm foundation!
I yell across the nation!
My savior, my life,
You saved me from my strife,
But everything can be changed from just one night.
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Published 16th Jan 2011
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Anonymous
16th Jan 2011 7:56am
I love the underlying meaning. "I have a brain, I'm not insane, I am an illness, A plague." are my favorite lines most definetely.
Anonymous
16th Jan 2011 8:06am
oh and I absolutely love your little quote thing on your profile...by Dr. Seuss. :) My idol<3
16th Jan 2011 9:08am
Thank you. I like being appreciated for my work! It makes my day and makes me want to write more :)
16th Jan 2011 9:09am
Yea. That Dr. Seuss quote is my favorite quote of all quotes. The meaning behind it is priceless. He has such a way with words hahaha :)
